well, love the story, love the chapter, love the new scene:) but girl, thats one hell of a cliff hanger...and while its certainly a briliant one, I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT:)
Evil leaving it like that! What's happened to Sev? What did you do to the man now?
That's an evil place to leave things! Great chapter. Good suspense.
Really want to giggle? You should picture Severus doing the Electric Slide!! :P
LOL!
Really enjoying this very much! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Hugs and Love,
Vanime
I absolutely love this story. I think it keeps all the characters in character while taking them in new and exciting places! Can't wait to see where you go with lucius and severus in addition to sev and harry. I love your dumbledore too, and the relationship he has with sev. Something about an evil dumbledore just makes me sad and he's everywhere. Thanks for writing! Hope you feel better!
Brilliant chapter...I loved the line "The eyes were definitely Lily's…but the sly grin...that was pure Severus". I was chuckling quite a bit reading this chapter...very well written with the humor. I love the way Severus is becoming a little kinder to Harry.
I love the image I got of severus singing, it reminded me of my mom when she would cook dinner. I did add him dancing a little as well, very amusing. Very anxious to see what trials await father and son.
I really liked these last two chapters. I like that Severus is becoming more fatherly. Cheers! Update soon.
You know for some reason, I cannot wait to see Severus address Harry's manners when around guests. I think it will be hilarious! Also I cannot wait to see if Harry attempts to use the black mail on Severus. By the by, are Sirus and Severus going to have a blow out at some point in time, because for some reason it appears that one is building. Don't know why I get that impression. Maybe I want one? *shakes head and sighs*
By the way, is there any way we can get Severus to do a rendition of "These Boots Are Made for Walking?" Please?
Love this story! I am so glad you continue to write it! I love the relationship building between Harry and Severus!
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