Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title:
Reflections and Apologizes
17 Jun 2011 5:24 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    I decided to read on last story before I left for Albuquerque to see my husband who is hospitalized there. Yours was that story. I am in tears......I know this is a one shot but please please considering continuing this. I would love to see where this would go. Wonderful story/start. Thank you for making my day a bit brighter when the last four months have been so down in darkness.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it and that everything goes well for you.  I'll consider writing more.  Thank you for taking the time to review!
Title:
Reflections and Apologizes
17 Jun 2011 10:34 am
Reviewer: Smiley (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So brilliant. The Narnia quote at the end was a nice touch even if it was a bit out of context, but then when you think about it it wasn't cause the magic kind of caused Snape to be brought back to life. In a way, kind of... maybe. I dunno. Anyway, I really enjoyed this, even if I generally have a thing against oneshots.

    Author's Response:

    The quote was a last minute edition, mostly going a long with my thought that there was older magic than what the boys knew about.  I'm glad you enjoyed my story and hope that you have a wonderful day!

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title:
Reflections and Apologizes
17 Jun 2011 8:25 am
Reviewer: Anon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The plot felt like so much wish-fulfillment and betrayed such a misunderstanding of the books that it obscured all of the fairly good writing. I find it quite interesting that you use a C.S. Lewis quote at the end since it is much more likely that Aslan would think the apology should go the other way, or at the very least both ways than what occured here. The more I think of the tone and theme of The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe, and the actions of the children therein, the more out of place with this fic that quote becomes.

    Author's Response:

    *laughes* That was the tone of the review I got for my other story.  Alas, I couldn't get it out of my head and wrote this to appease the plot bunny.

    As for the quote, it was just in referring to the wish magic.  You can call it out of place, I really don't care.  It's just a thought that came to my mind.

    Either way, thank you for taking the time to review.

Title:
Reflections and Apologizes
17 Jun 2011 4:54 am
Reviewer: dorothy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    lovely! it would be amazing if you actually wrote the story this is setting up so well...
    =)
    i like that you deal with how the way harry was treated would actually impact a young, growing mind

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I'm glad to hear you liked it and noticed the point about environment on Harry.  I'm glad someone did! ;<P

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title:
Reflections and Apologizes
17 Jun 2011 2:47 am
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this! I'd really love to see you take it forward, though I understand what a big job it could be. I'd have to laugh at the rest of the cast--Dumbledore, for instance. He'd be so confused and frustratd

    Author's Response: I can just picture how confused he'd be when Harry would tell him to take the points back.  The Gryffindors would not be happy.
Title:
Reflections and Apologizes
17 Jun 2011 1:31 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    "That when a willing victim who has commited no treachery is killed in place of the traitor, the stone table will crack, and even Death itself will be denied." Kudos.

    Author's Response: *grins* Yep.  I love that part of the book.  Thanks for the review/quote!
Title:
Reflections and Apologizes
17 Jun 2011 12:08 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I like it!

    Thanks for sharing
    V.

    Author's Response: Your welcome!
Title:
Reflections and Apologizes
16 Jun 2011 10:43 pm
Reviewer: Sirena (Signed) [Report This]
    If I understood it good the second story you mention would be a sequel for this one, so I will be much appreciated to read it :) I think I know which story you are referring to and it keeps me in belief that I will find liking in your next creation. Besides this one is really interesting idea, that they have gone back in time to repair their lives :)

    Author's Response:

    *laughs* <br><br>

    I actually hadn't been thinking of writing a sequel to this one, I was referring to another story I wrote (I feel like a story pimp doing this but...) that is on my author page here.  However, I am thinking of writing a sequel to this one since everyone has been asking me so nicely for one.  I just have to figure out the logistics of the sequel. <br><br>

    Thank you so much for the review!  And I'll see if I can help those two repair their lives.

Title:
Reflections and Apologizes
16 Jun 2011 9:27 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this. I'd loved to see a sequel to this. :D Great Job.

    Author's Response: Didn't I just read a review from you on fanfiction.net?  *laughs* I'll think about it.  Let me finish the next story in <b><i>What Would Have Been</i></b>, and I'll definitely think about it. 

    Author's Response: Didn't I just read a review from you on fanfiction.net?  *laughs* I'll think about it.  Let me finish the next story in <b><i>What Would Have Been</i></b>, and I'll definitely think about it. 

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