I like the direction of the story and am looking forward to more!
However, there are some painful spelling and grammatical errors; some of the canon characters names are misspelled and that is on the top ten list of fanfic writer' greatest sins.
There are so many spelling errors that it is beginning to affect the enjoyment of the story. By the way, it is "work ethic" and not "work effect".
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