| Title: Chapter 3 Through the Looking Mirror
| 18 Aug 2011 10:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Um there were a few small problems. It's not dissipated, it's disapperated. In chapter three (or two, depends on how you look at it) Uncle Vernon said they had no work effect instead of ethic. This is good and I like it. I hope you update soon!
Peace!
CheyRain
| Title: Chapter 3 Through the Looking Mirror
| 03 Jul 2011 12:15 am
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| Reviewer: Caesara (Signed)
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This is really good!
I feel bad for Harry, but I'm sure that Snape will help :)
| Title: Chapter 3 Through the Looking Mirror
| 02 Jul 2011 7:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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This chapter was better than the last few in terms of the number of errors. Remember that Harry's mother's name is spelled "Lily", like the flower, and not "Lilly".
| Title: Chapter 3 Through the Looking Mirror
| 02 Jul 2011 7:04 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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I look forward to reading more of this story. A Very interesting beginning.
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