| Title: Chapter 3 Through the Looking Mirror
| 03 Jul 2011 12:15 am
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| Reviewer: Caesara (Signed)
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This is really good!
I feel bad for Harry, but I'm sure that Snape will help :)
| Title: Chapter 3 Through the Looking Mirror
| 02 Jul 2011 7:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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This chapter was better than the last few in terms of the number of errors. Remember that Harry's mother's name is spelled "Lily", like the flower, and not "Lilly".
| Title: Chapter 3 Through the Looking Mirror
| 02 Jul 2011 7:04 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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I look forward to reading more of this story. A Very interesting beginning.
| Title: Chapter 2 Summer Holiday
| 01 Jul 2011 9:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Cass (Anonymous)
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I like the direction of the story and am looking forward to more!
However, there are some painful spelling and grammatical errors; some of the canon characters names are misspelled and that is on the top ten list of fanfic writer' greatest sins.
| Title: Chapter 2 Summer Holiday
| 01 Jul 2011 4:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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There are so many spelling errors that it is beginning to affect the enjoyment of the story. By the way, it is "work ethic" and not "work effect".
| Title: Prologue, Walpurgis Night
| 01 Jul 2011 3:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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It is interesting so far and I can't wait to see where you take it. There were a few misspelled words and you forgot a quotation mark.
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