I really like the premise, and that Albus is really worried about Severus. But I have to say that I really felt it out of character for Professor McGonogall to swear so much. If she must use an expletive, I'd think that it would feel more like the books if she used the ones that are used in the novels.
I will say that I like seeing a de-aged Severus who apparently doesn't have his adult memories. This looks like a fresh start for Severus, where he can hopefully grow up this time to be a less bitter and angry person.
I am going to dive into the next chapter now, because I'm really looking forward to where you are going with this. :)
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Aww, little Sev is so cute and it's so sad that Dumbledore had to tell him that Eileen was dead.
It was almost funny though that Minerva was freaking out that much.
Good start and now I need to see what happens next.
Oh wow. You have me captivated right from the start. Update soon
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