| Title: A Favor
| 25 Jul 2011 9:11 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Great beginning. Can't wait to read more. Sirius as Sevs guardian guarantees an interesting story.
I read and then suddenly no more. Update soon, pretty please. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon
Author's Response: I am editing the third chapter as we speak and will have it up in about ten minutes top...anymore is because I wanted to add a few things ;)
| Title: A Favor
| 25 Jul 2011 5:45 am
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| Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous)
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This is a very good beginning. I've never seen Sirius pressed into service to care for a de-aged Snape, but I like it. I also cheered when you had Albus poke Sirius with the "you did try to kill him when he was a boy, and you didn't even apologize". So, I think you have Sirius pretty well; sometimes a jerk, and very set in his opinion of Severus, but not a complete b*****d. And poor little four year old Sev, wanting his mummy. :-( Write more soon.
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