Aww, little Sev is so cute and it's so sad that Dumbledore had to tell him that Eileen was dead.
It was almost funny though that Minerva was freaking out that much.
Good start and now I need to see what happens next.
Love it. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon
Love it, Sevvy is so sweet :D Update soon
Awwwwwwww~
This is absolutely adorable!
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| 25 Jul 2011 9:11 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Great beginning. Can't wait to read more. Sirius as Sevs guardian guarantees an interesting story.
I read and then suddenly no more. Update soon, pretty please. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon
Author's Response: I am editing the third chapter as we speak and will have it up in about ten minutes top...anymore is because I wanted to add a few things ;)
Oh wow. You have me captivated right from the start. Update soon
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| 25 Jul 2011 5:45 am
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| Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous)
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This is a very good beginning. I've never seen Sirius pressed into service to care for a de-aged Snape, but I like it. I also cheered when you had Albus poke Sirius with the "you did try to kill him when he was a boy, and you didn't even apologize". So, I think you have Sirius pretty well; sometimes a jerk, and very set in his opinion of Severus, but not a complete b*****d. And poor little four year old Sev, wanting his mummy. :-( Write more soon.
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