OMG! This is a really good story-but can you cut the swearing, it makes Harry's character way too much OOC for him. Thank you!
LOVED THIS! Can't wait to see where you go with this. Please update soon!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 27 Jul 2011 2:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Delphin (Anonymous)
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I don't know if this was supposed to be funny (probably not >.> ) but me and my over exhausted brain found it hilarious! :D
Very well written, too. Kept me hanging on every word... even if I did need to go back and read a few things cause my brain thought they were funny and I red them to fast at first to realize it... XD
Author's Response: LOL at least *some* parts were supposed to be funny. :0) This story is mostly angsty mentor-fic stuff, but if you've read Life as Dictated you've discovered that I always try for at least some humor. :0) Thanks for the review!!
Great first chapter. Looking forward to more :)
Brilliant first chapter! I was just getting proper into it and then it stopped, so I'm definitely looking forward to the next update :)
I like the story so far! I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 27 Jul 2011 10:25 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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I loved this I want mor eplease thank you ....
I love it;)
When will be next chapter?
This is awesome. Please write more. I would love to hear what Snape thinks of Harry's little scheme...which actually is rather brilliant, if unfortunate. I love this interpretation of the prophecy!
What a clever idea for a story! I'm excited to read more, and I appreciate the quick pace. I hope there might just be some Harry/Snape comfort scenes down the road!
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