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Reviews For Harry Granger
Title: Chapter 1 28 Jul 2011 4:05 pm
Reviewer: Helene (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like this! It feels like it is going to be a fantastic story!

    I like the history you have given Harry. Specifically the competent primary school teacher who noticed an abused Harry and the subsequent adoption by the Granger family. I like how Hermione affects Harry but we still have a Harry who would rather play quidditch, he just has better study skills thanks to his big sister's fussing! I love the supportive family and the banter between H & H.

    I also like the position you have Snape in. With Harry in his house and not meeting his preconceptions he is bound do treat Harry differently than in cannon. I also like that you have kept the Draco rivalry.

    It will be interesting to see where you take this story. I find myself looking for updates.

    Author's Response: Thank you Helene! I really appreicate the in-depth review, it's every writer's dream!! I like the cannon interaction between Hermione and Harry, so it felt right to let her muggle family be the family that adopted him, and I really enjoy writing them. I didn't want to change his character too much, but still wanted to take into account the differences that would stem from him being raised away from the Dursleys. I should have an update by this time next week, and I hope you'll continue to enjoy.
Title: Chapter 1 28 Jul 2011 11:56 am
Reviewer: Ladyduquesa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ¡ey! Thank you.
    I've liked this chapter. I'm learning english and it's a bit difficult read in english, but I've enjoyed your history a lot.
    I will be waiting a new chapter.
    Thanks

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Sorry it was a difficult read--is there something in particular that was hard for you? I like learning from my mistakes. :)
Title: Chapter 1 28 Jul 2011 10:53 am
Reviewer: Rhea (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful!

    Author's Response: Thanks :)
Title: Chapter 1 28 Jul 2011 9:54 am
Reviewer: DareToBeWeird (Signed) [Report This]
    This is really good! I like the whole idea a lot, and it is written very well :)

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!!
Title: Chapter 1 28 Jul 2011 8:35 am
Reviewer: abby1000 (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting premise. I will continue to read.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 28 Jul 2011 8:24 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow! I loved it! Hope to see the next chapter soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I am hoping to post once a week on Wednesdays.
Title: Chapter 1 28 Jul 2011 6:59 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    This is an excellant start! I think i'm really going to like this story!

    Author's Response: Thank you!!
Title: Chapter 1 28 Jul 2011 5:15 am
Reviewer: Hobbit (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great start =) I was so glad you didn't make Harry best buds with Malfoy - that happens in so many fics and it really annoys me! Long chapters are wonderful - update soon =D

    Author's Response: Thank you!! I enjoy the Harry/Malfoy buddy fics, but it just didn't feel right for this story. Glad you liked it, I hope to continue to please!
Title: Chapter 1 28 Jul 2011 4:45 am
Reviewer: Snivilily (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this! I was so in the mood for a story like this. I'm excited to see how you continue it.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on the next chapter now, the first chapter was 25 pages, so I apparently set the bar high for myself, lol. I hope you continue to enjoy it!

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