| Title: The Hovel
| 09 Aug 2011 10:13 am
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| Reviewer: Wandacarla (Anonymous)
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Very intriguing. I can't wait to see where you go with this story. I hope to see an update soon (:
| Title: The Hovel
| 07 Aug 2011 10:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Interesting and very good how Severus handled Lucius, IC, thank you
Love this, update soon. I wanna see Harry and snape in their polyjuiced forms LOL
I wonder if their "disguises" are the complete opposite of them . For example snape is thin so his "disguise" has a bit of a pudge... Lol
Can't wait.
Lovely, can't wait to see what happens next!
Sneaky Sev! I like! So its interesting to see Harry in awe and feeling so inadequete compared to Snape. The poor boy does not even seem to realize that he has never been trained to do half the things that Snape can. Hopefully Snape can work on his self worth right? Great story, looking forward to more!
| Title: The Hovel
| 01 Aug 2011 5:26 am
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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You meant "don disguises" and not "dawn". Also, "leeway" and not "leave way". I am interested in seeing where you go with this story.
Um... apparating from within Hogwarts is not possible because of the wards.
And they could use Dobby to deliver messages after he promises not to tell ANYONE where they are.
Author's Response: Apparating can happen on the grounds of Hogwarts if the wards are manipulated. Dumbledore and Harry apparated off of Hogwarts grounds in the sixth book, and although Snape isn't Dumbledore I believe him to be smart enough to find a way to manipulate the wards to let him. Also, I didn't choose Dobby as a secret keeper because I don't think he would trust Snape enough to keep a secret for him, especially if Dumbledore manipulated Dobby into thinking that Snape was actually taking Harry to harm him or hand him over to Voldemort
Alright, Chapter two, again good chapter :)
I like that Harry for once actually realizes how qualified Severus actually is and that he aknowledges it in a way too, and I like that Snape picks up on the attitude, he truly is not one that does well with attitude :)
I like the plot so far, Sev making sure that they get out of Hogwarts safely and doublechecking with Malfoy, though I really dislike that man, and Sev obviously does as well.
Great idea to have Sev play him like this.
The only thing I was missing here was the interaction between Sev and Harry, but honestly, if I would have to find a spot for them to "interact" more, I wouldn't know where to put it, so I guess you did a great job, again.
Can't wait for the next one, now that I stuck to my side of the deal :)
I like this idea a hole lot better than JK's, I hated that Snape dies. I can't wait for the next chapter. Harry isn't as stupid as they try to make him be.
Author's Response: I am truly honored that you wrote that :) Thank you so much!
Oh dear! I wonder if it was wise to threaten Malfoy. Let's just hope his threats don't backfire on him.
I'm interested to see how you will develop the story.
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