Amazing chapter. I was holding my breath for much of it. Harry’s aggression is palpable, as is his shame and despair. The chapter end was perfect.
I've never been a fan of the whole Harry/Ginny relationship. It came out of nowhere canonically speaking and I always felt like on Ginny's part it was a bit of hero worship (I mean, the cute savior of the world is suddenly in your house all the time) and on Harry's part of was more so gratitude for the whole weasley family for taking him in like they did. That said, I don't agree with Snape giving up on him like he did either. That sucked. Harry handled it the only way he could think to handle it. In his mind, justice had to be done and it wasn't going to be done if he didn't do it
| Title: Choices
| 07 May 2013 11:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I can't believe that no one has asked why Harry is behaving so differently from before! Thank you a great chapter
I guess it was just a matter of time before Harry lost it. At least he got Avery to admit what he had done.
Omg! Poor Harry.
I really hope that Snape goes after him! :O
Great chappie, but an evil cliffie. Good thing that there is more to read! :)
You are so aaaaaaagh... you're a wonderful writer but I'm so mad at you for stopping here. I love cliffhangers under one condition: that I can continue reading!
I really love this story and I like how you describe stuff and feeling. I really hope Snape isn't going to be all caring and sweet in the next chapter or so. I really prefer a Snape who goes sweet slowly(I hope you get what I mean).
I have to tell you I just couldn't stop reading until the very last letter of this chapter! And I am still pissed off that there isn't more.
I would love to see Harry getting angrier at himself and perhaps trying to reach out to someone (but that someone doesn't react/ignores) or something. I must say I really love drama and I love to see Harry getting hurt (jees I'm so terrible :s Sorry Harry) badly. And I love slow recoveries! I hate it when the person in question is "cured" (mentally and/or physically) in one day or so
Well I'm going to finished this terrible long reviewish rant and I hope you are going to post anotehr chapter (another six or so) very soon! I really can't wait to read more! (I want to rate more then awesome, as in super fantastic, but I can't, sorry.)
The professors are complete idiots if they don't realize that there is obviously some underlying issue to all of Harrys problems. I mean, how stupid can they be? Not one of themhas truly tried to help, although Sev is attempting. But I mean, really? They are all blaming things on him even if it isn't his fault. Gah! Anyways, good chapter and I cannot wait until the next chapter!
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