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Title: Vorspiel: Welcome to Hogwarts 16 Oct 2016 12:24 am
Reviewer: ohreally86 (Signed) [Report This]
    I suppose this has long been abandoned, but well done on what you have here.
Title: Vorspiel: Welcome to Hogwarts 26 Feb 2012 9:42 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    What a fascinating beginning to the story. I don't think I have ever come across a story where Harry is a ghost before. I will definitely be going to read the next chater once I finish typing this review.

    I like the way you describe things and the characterization of Ghost-Harry makes me want to hug him. The only thing that I've found a bit distracting is some spelling errors and one or two cases where you used one word when you meant another ("excepted" for "accepted", for example). Given those types of errors I was wondering if English isn't your primary language or if you were using a speech to text program and dictating your story. Regardless, the errors haven't tossed me out of the story. I think you have a lovely talent at writing descriptions and personalities. The events seem vey real to me. I've added your story to my favorites list and look forward to the the rest of the tale.
Title: Vorspiel: Welcome to Hogwarts 16 Feb 2012 6:39 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting nd I'm looking forward to reading more
Title: Vorspiel: Welcome to Hogwarts 15 Feb 2012 8:24 pm
Reviewer: elizzza (Signed) [Report This]
    I am enjoying this story. It is unusual. I cannot see that there will be any confusion so far.
    Are you by any chance planning a resurrection ... considering the title of the book "Potions for the Souls of the Dead. By Eli Watkins"...?
Title: Vorspiel: Welcome to Hogwarts 14 Feb 2012 9:49 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Very Nice aI hoep to see more soon when you can that is I really do like this...
Title: Vorspiel: Welcome to Hogwarts 14 Feb 2012 4:27 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    This seems like a great begining. Just one question...will the story end with Harry remaining a ghost? Will he ever be reunited with his father?
Title: Vorspiel: Welcome to Hogwarts 14 Feb 2012 4:23 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Now I'm really curious. What happened? How did Harry realize his dad wasn't a bad guy? And will Snape one day be able to hold his son again?
Title: Vorspiel: Welcome to Hogwarts 14 Feb 2012 12:03 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this. Its very interesting. Update soon. I'm itching to find out more

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