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Reviews For Silver Lies
I like the way you describe things and the characterization of Ghost-Harry makes me want to hug him. The only thing that I've found a bit distracting is some spelling errors and one or two cases where you used one word when you meant another ("excepted" for "accepted", for example). Given those types of errors I was wondering if English isn't your primary language or if you were using a speech to text program and dictating your story. Regardless, the errors haven't tossed me out of the story. I think you have a lovely talent at writing descriptions and personalities. The events seem vey real to me. I've added your story to my favorites list and look forward to the the rest of the tale.
Are you by any chance planning a resurrection ... considering the title of the book "Potions for the Souls of the Dead. By Eli Watkins"...?
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