I really like this. Can't wait for more :)
I really like this. Can't wait for more :)
I really like this. Can't wait for more :)
this is really compelling. I love the concept :)
| Title: Hard Lessons to Learn
| 25 Aug 2013 3:39 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the vulnerable Harry, after his experiences it is understandable. I'm looking forward to more Severs and Harry!
It's so great to see an update from you! Your stories are some of the most inventive and intriguing I've ever read. I absolutely love them. And this one is no exception :)
I love that you are exploring Filch's character and perspective. Because, really, look at his treatment in general. He's normally just shoved in the corner as some unsavory and unfortunate person better left forgotten except for when he can be used for comic relief. Of course such a perspective would be great and perfect to write from, but I've never seen it done. So yay to you!
To answer your question at the end, I'm sure I'm echoing many other people, but I'd like Severus to find Harry. Mostly because his interactions with Harry have so far been just little momentary flashes, and I'm anxious for their relationship to be fleshed out a bit more. But I'm sure that whatever direction you choose to go in will be awesome! I'm eagerly awaiting the next!
| Title: Hard Lessons to Learn
| 22 Aug 2013 12:08 am
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Harry might be better off than at the Dursleys, but he's having to work so hard for a 10 year old. Its sad that he doesn't seem to expect, or even really hope for, anything more. No doubt Filch is being a little hard on him to make sure that he's really familiar with Hogwarts before the students return. He probably knows from experience that some of them won't be friendly to someone without magic.
I hope someone stops nasty Peeves from harassing Harry. If it was Snape it could give Harry the opportunity to satisfy some of his curiosity about the Professor, but if not I'm sure he'll work out a way for himself.
(Petunia's screech of horror at your suggestion that her house harbours mice was deafening!)
| Title: Hard Lessons to Learn
| 21 Aug 2013 11:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Aww. Poor Harry. I think Severus should find him of course ;)
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