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Title: Lent Day Six 28 Feb 2012 6:20 am
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh come on, where's that Gryffindor bravery? Just sitting there isn't going to get the message across to the stupid git, tell him what you are thinking Harry! Man up already!!!!!!!
Title: Lent Day Six 28 Feb 2012 2:27 am
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Lord! This isn't going anywhere! Poor Harry and Snape, having to endure Lent in this fashion - I almost feel sorry for them - but you know, this might be the catalyst for a screaming match where they get it all out of their system, maybe the next night?

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime
Title: Lent Day Six 28 Feb 2012 1:29 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy. It seems like Harry and Snape take one step forward and one step backwards.

    Will they ever be father and son.

    Good chappie, like usual.
Title: Lent Day Six 28 Feb 2012 12:55 am
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't see any improvement between them, maybe it's time for Albus to step in again.
Title: Lent Day Six 27 Feb 2012 11:02 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah well, there's always tomorrow. Or the next day. At least Severus didn't pick an argument with Harry.
Title: Lent Day Five 27 Feb 2012 10:59 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Maybe a hint of progress?
Title: Lent Day Six 27 Feb 2012 10:59 pm
Reviewer: Slegend (Signed) [Report This]
    hahah! That was funny! :-)

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you enjoyed it.

    Thanks for reviewing.

Title: Lent Day Five 27 Feb 2012 4:36 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that was how you were writing it and not me making up things in my head!

    Anyhow, at least this chapter brings so hope that maybe the brat will learn something.

    Really now, he shouldn't tell his dad anything because he is the head of Slytherin? Now who is house-biased? Maybe you should teach Harry a little lesson about what a family is, preferably before Sirius Black comes a knocking!

    PS- Do we know why Severus didn't know about Harry?
Title: Lent Day Five 27 Feb 2012 3:11 am
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    That could be the project! Learning chess with his father, and learning about life at the same time - because you know life is a game of chess...at least, metamorphically speaking... :)

    Great chapter, and no you are not crazy for a chapter a day - it keeps the Dementors away! LOL

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

    Author's Response:

    A chapter a day keeps the Dementors away, lol, I like it! And since this is a third year story, quite fitting really.

    Thanks for reviewing.

Title: Lent Day Five 27 Feb 2012 2:27 am
Reviewer: slashypotterness (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m really enjoying this so far! Harry and Snape are both really in character which is a rarity in fics with this subject matter. The only small piece of advice I’d like to offer is either a Beta or just proof reading a tad bit more carefully. Grammar wise I don’t see many errors, really I’ve just noticed a few typos. Even small ones take away from the flow of the story and to be honestly you are too good of a writer to mask it with spelling errors.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I just read over the last two paragraphs and realised how many errors there were. I was panicking a little last night and I literally wrote the entire chapter in about 30 minutes at about 9.30 last evening. Hopefully I've caught them all now. I usually have a online dictionary/theasurus open whilst I'm writing as I only have a really dated WordPad document to type with, which doesn't highlight any spelling mistakes - really annoying! I know I didn't proof read as much as I should of done last night, I just wanted to get the chapter posted and go to bed! I'm hoping to try and get the next couple of chapters wrote in advance, so I'll have more time to proof read them.

    Thanks for your review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story.


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