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Reviews For Denial
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Will they ever be father and son. Good chappie, like usual.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing.
Anyhow, at least this chapter brings so hope that maybe the brat will learn something. Really now, he shouldn't tell his dad anything because he is the head of Slytherin? Now who is house-biased? Maybe you should teach Harry a little lesson about what a family is, preferably before Sirius Black comes a knocking! PS- Do we know why Severus didn't know about Harry?
Great chapter, and no you are not crazy for a chapter a day - it keeps the Dementors away! LOL Hugs and Love, Vanime Author's Response: A chapter a day keeps the Dementors away, lol, I like it! And since this is a third year story, quite fitting really. Thanks for reviewing.
Author's Response: Thanks, I just read over the last two paragraphs and realised how many errors there were. I was panicking a little last night and I literally wrote the entire chapter in about 30 minutes at about 9.30 last evening. Hopefully I've caught them all now. I usually have a online dictionary/theasurus open whilst I'm writing as I only have a really dated WordPad document to type with, which doesn't highlight any spelling mistakes - really annoying! I know I didn't proof read as much as I should of done last night, I just wanted to get the chapter posted and go to bed! I'm hoping to try and get the next couple of chapters wrote in advance, so I'll have more time to proof read them. Thanks for your review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. |
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