So will Severus finally take care of Harry? Or will he leave Draco to do it?
I always love your work and this story is no different. I always like to give at least on piece of constructive criticism in my reviews (how else can we improve right?) but I really can’t find anything to say, it was THAT good.
YAY! This is an interesting plot line that I've never seen before! I can't wait to see where you take this...especially with Snape and harry's relationship. I hope Harry's okay! Great job!
Title: What They Sent You
| 26 Feb 2012 9:59 pm
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Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
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A very interesting beginning! I don't like Sirius much, so I don't mind seeing him as the bad guy. Poor Harry must be heartbroken, though.
I also liked the rather cold and unfeeling Snape you showed here; he seems very realistic.
Looking forward to more!
Brilliant first chapters. I'm more than curious how this will develop and really like the friendship between Harry and Draco. In hopes for some healing scenes, your Melfis. ^_____^
This story has an excellent start; the first chapter immediately had my attention and the second definitely makes me curious to see where it goes with these three...
An excellent start. I've enjoyed your stories, hope you continue with this one.
Cant wait to read more of this one. It is my favorite already of your stories!:)
Love it, update soon can't wait for more
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