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Title: The First Reaction 19 Dec 2012 5:12 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I just started reading the story and I love it. I wouldlike to point out an inconsistency though. However I did check with your reviews in case some one else pointed it out. I did not see one but if I missed it I apologize. "He pulled out his copper cauldron" ... "the cast iron weight of it". I hope this wasn't meant to be a metaphor that I missed.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much, we'll fix that right away. 

    Kim and TabbyBri

Title: The First Reaction 28 Aug 2012 11:04 pm
Reviewer: NightPhoenix69 (Signed) [Report This]
    I remember reading this story a while ago and vaguely remember bits and pieces. I always wondered what happened to it or if it was finished. I am re-reading it again. With the new changes I really like it. Keep going!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reading again.  We just put too much into one story and each chapter we struggled to fit it all in.  Too many situations and too many characters made it too complicated.  The rewrite is better, we hope.  Thanks so much for reading.

    Kim and TabbyBri

Title: The First Reaction 11 Aug 2012 7:37 pm
Reviewer: PamPam (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful! that - Not Potter. No, Potter. Please do not Merlin, Potter! - I hope it's because he has mistreated unfairly if it is not ... well, I hope soon as it truly understands Harry.

    compliments good job!

    Author's Response: Thank you and yeah, it's because he hates Harry but that will change eventually.  I don't want him to decide he loves Harry out of pity so first he has to see Harry for who he really is before he can come to realize he's been stupid about him all along.
Title: The First Reaction 07 Mar 2012 6:42 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    *evil chuckle* poor poor severus! i remember reading this now. I hope we get more soon!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, poor Severus, he definitely does not want this.  More to come hopefully before the end of the week.  Thank you review!

    Kim and TabbyBri 

Title: The First Reaction 07 Mar 2012 7:31 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Cant wait for more.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, it should be up soon.

    Kim and TabbyBri

Title: The First Reaction 05 Mar 2012 11:57 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good tension and a little cliffie thank you plese update oon

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  We hope to have chapter 3 up within the week.


    Kim and TabbyBri

Title: The First Reaction 05 Mar 2012 6:31 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, yes yes!!! More please!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much!  We're working on the next chapter as we speak, and I hope you'll enjoy that one, too.

    Kim and TabbyBri

Title: The First Reaction 05 Mar 2012 1:50 am
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    Ut oh...someone's not too happy about this...But it is going to get better right? :P

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

    Author's Response:

    No, he isn't very happy.  And yes, we're hoping for Harry's sake that it does get better.  Thanks for the review!

    Kim and TabbyBri

Title: The First Reaction 04 Mar 2012 11:58 am
Reviewer: Snapy (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi I'm loving your story! =) it's great and angsty, just as I like them. (just one little thing, the tracheotomy is done between the tiroid cartilage and the cricoid cartilage ;))

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  And thanks for the hint.  I looked it up and what I wrote is what the site said, but I should have double checked my sources.  I'm trained to do the proceedure, but I have long since forgotten the names of the structures.  We really appreciate your thoughts and your help!

    KIm and TabbyBri

Title: The First Reaction 04 Mar 2012 8:42 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a great story so far. Well written and interesting. Little different "discovery process" than other fanfics I have red -- so congrats on that. It's gotta be hard to find new methods for Severitus-type fics.

    Anyway, good job. I look forward to reading more chapters.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  We loved your review.  We want this story to be different, if there is such a thing in fan ficdom.  When we first published it, I hadn't seen the method used before, though one was published with it shortly after.  We're exploring different ideas in this story, ones I haven't seen before, or at least not often.  We hope we do them well, and that they are interesting and satisfying.  Our new chapter is under way, thanks for staying with us.

    Kim and TabbyBri


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