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Title: The Accommodations 05 Jan 2013 10:38 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay, an update! :). Sounds like Harry has a really nice place to stay, and I hope his good mood lasts for a while. Life with his professor is sure to bring lots of ups and downs.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  We really appreciate your taking time to review.  We had fun creating Harry's space, he will need a refuge, I'm sure.

    Kim and TabbyBri

Title: The Accommodations 05 Jan 2013 4:43 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad you guys write Harry as being how he is and don't rush any relationships. I love the fact Harry doesn't think there might be other reasons why Sev would give more expensive gifts. Looks like Sev isn't the only one with biases. I wonder if Harry realizes that?

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Hi, and thank you.  We really don't see Harry and Snape as wanting this new reality at all.  We figure that if they ever do accept it, we'll have to drag them to it.  As for biases, I guess they both have a lot to learn about each other.  Thanks so much!

    Kim and Tabby Bri

Title: The Accommodations 05 Jan 2013 9:00 am
Reviewer: Kaelisea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's great to see this updated! I love Severus as Harry's biological dad fanfics, the stories always take very creative turns! So far I'm loving yours, and no worries about the wait although I'll admit I couldn't wait for an update. However, being a new writer of fanfics/stories myself I sympathize & understand that sometimes life just gets in the way. Anyways awesome job!

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review!  We really appreciate the kind words.  Care to send a note with your story info so we can take a look? 
Title: The Rite of Guardianship 03 Jan 2013 8:48 pm
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed) [Report This]
    Well I am a grandmother and didn't allow little things like weather keep me from going to my granddaughters birth. The Snaps family should be aware of this if nothing else through the Prophet. Wonder how that will change things? Excellent story.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your review.  Snape probably should have told them but he didn't care enough to.  Rest assured, his family will not only find out, but will be very involved in Harry's life whether Snape likes it or not. 

    Kim and TabbyBri

Title: The First Reaction 19 Dec 2012 5:12 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I just started reading the story and I love it. I wouldlike to point out an inconsistency though. However I did check with your reviews in case some one else pointed it out. I did not see one but if I missed it I apologize. "He pulled out his copper cauldron" ... "the cast iron weight of it". I hope this wasn't meant to be a metaphor that I missed.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much, we'll fix that right away. 

    Kim and TabbyBri

Title: The Rite of Guardianship 04 Dec 2012 12:46 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Good story so far, I'm enjoying it. I think it's wonderful that Sirius and Remus still get to be a part of Harry's life.

    Hope to read more soon :).

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I'm sorry I didn't see this earlier, it was stuck in my "spam" folder, for some reason.  We really appreciate the review and are working on the next chapter and hope to have it out within a week.

    Kim and TabbyBri

Title: The Rite of Guardianship 24 Sep 2012 3:07 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Another lovely chapter! :)

    Author's Response:

    Why thank you!  We really appreciate your review.

    Kim and TabbyBri

Title: The Rite of Guardianship 23 Sep 2012 8:16 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this story. I hadn't read the prior version, but I really like this one.

    I especially like how you are not rushing in getting Severus to accept Harry, much less love him. The amount of negativity that Severus has towards Harry in canon would make it quite difficult to change attitudes, and you've shown this clearly and well.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

    (And I think that it is cool that you are a mother/daughter writing team.)

    Well done! :-)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much!  We really appreciate your review.  We've gone through sites that have quotes from the books for all the main characters and have refreshed our memories as to how they talk and behave.  It seems to help because otherwise we'd find ourselves building on other fan fics rather than canon.  We're glad it seems realistic so far.  Thank you again, and yes, it is cool that my kiddo helps me out.  Without her, Harry would act too young, Dumbledore wouldn't be treating Harry like a fellow adult. but instead as a kid, and he didn't treat him like a kid in canon.  And Snape, I dunno, I think we agree on him.  Anyway, she has this unbelievable memory for anything she's ever read so whenever I goof, she's there to tell me so.  Without her, I would have scrapped the project long ago.  So we both thank you.

    Kim and TabbyBri

Title: The Consequences 20 Sep 2012 2:11 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Well at least Snape finally got to see how horrible life was for Harry. That was after all a big part of his poor treatment of him. I think that we can expect a slight change in aditude towards his son.
    Please update again soon!

    Author's Response:

    Snape sure does make me crazy.  Going over all the quotes attributed to Snape makes me despise him all the more, all the while wanting to redeem him, make him see who Harry really is.  It will take some doing, but I think we can get him there.

    Thanks for the review!

    Kim and TabbyBri

Title: The Consequences 20 Sep 2012 12:27 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great to have an update on this story. I read it all again to refresh the memory and enjoyed it a lot. I like how you are portraying the characters and of course Severus' reaction to the news. Thank you and please update when you can

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, we're very grateful.  We appreciate your kind words.  We're updating yet this week, we hope.

    Kim and TabbyBri


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