So sad:( Popr James, I bet he really wants to be more fatherly towards Harry but he can't. Your writing is really good:)
I enjoyed chapter 3. James was wonderful. Both boys seem to be in character, too. Very nice story.
Oh, Harry. How cruel that when he finally sees his dad there's no real comfort for him.
Author's Response: I know... It took me a bit to decide how James and Lily should behave, but I settled on that... I think it must be really hard for Harry.
Nice chapter. This is one of the few stories where I like Dudley, even just a bit.
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