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Reviews For Parentes Filius Custos Praesidium
Author's Response: I hope that you like the way I handle the name changes. It's kind of a big part of the story :P
Dudley is at a good age to be trained, with loving discipline, he can change.
May I make a tiny little suggestion? I think you should use Mum instead of Mom. It'll make your story more British, that's all:)Otherwise, great chapter and have fun on your holiday! Author's Response: Ooh, thanks for the Mum suggestion. I actually KNEW that, back in my fanfiction haydays, but I haven't been on fanfic in a while and I totally forgot about that :P
Author's Response: Oh, Golly!!! I picked the name out at 2:30 in the morning because I was trying to get the chapter out before I went on vacation, and I totally didn't pick up on that gaffe. Luckily, I saw this review just before I went on vaca and had the whole week to figure out a classy way to fix that while simultaneously moving my plot along. Thanks for pointing it out!!! |
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