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Reviews For Parentes Filius Custos Praesidium
I really like your story and this was probably my favourite chappie so far!
Author's Response: Oh, Golly!!! I picked the name out at 2:30 in the morning because I was trying to get the chapter out before I went on vacation, and I totally didn't pick up on that gaffe. Luckily, I saw this review just before I went on vaca and had the whole week to figure out a classy way to fix that while simultaneously moving my plot along. Thanks for pointing it out!!!
I like James and Harry's interaction in here, and I'm intrested to see where this is gonn go.
Your writing is really good:)
I do like Harry's POV and resentfulness at his father's cold demeanor. I mean, Lily isn't supposed to get too involved, but she's still LILY. *nods* I shall add you to my favorites! Author's Response: Aww, I'm flattered!!! I'm really glad that you're enjoying this so far.
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