I enjoyed chapter 3. James was wonderful. Both boys seem to be in character, too. Very nice story.
Very sweet. Rather short, because I always want more, but stopped at a good spot. Still love it.
Wow. That left me breathless. Unique, well written, great start!
Oh, Harry. How cruel that when he finally sees his dad there's no real comfort for him.
Author's Response: I know... It took me a bit to decide how James and Lily should behave, but I settled on that... I think it must be really hard for Harry.
Nice chapter. This is one of the few stories where I like Dudley, even just a bit.
Very interesting. I'm not sure how I feel about Dudly, but I look forward to reading more.
Interesting. Should be fun finding out how Snape deals with the boys.
That's a different start to a story!
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