OMG! This was amazing!.....*yawn* zzzzzz
Hahaaaa this made me laugh quite a lot! And I absolutely love how you developed their relationship over the years! Good job :)
| Title: Good Night, Harry
| 26 May 2012 11:50 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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So now we know why Snape is so snarky! Thanks for making me laugh - I do like your humorous stories.
That was amusing. I rather liked your characterization of Snape, and how you portrayed Harry and Snape's relationship. Although, one thing you might want to do, is put a line between transitions within each year as when scenes suddenly changed without even an extra space it could get pretty confusing. Although, that could have just been a formatting bug, I dunno. Oh, and I also really liked the scene where Harry asks Snape to duel.
Author's Response: Thank you for your comments :) Thanks also for the heads-up about the formatting. It's something about the way things get uploaded, but is fixed now.
Haha love it. Awesome work.
This was a nice twist. And all because of sleep lol. Good job.
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