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Title: Chapter 1: Surprise 16 Sep 2012 11:45 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I think i'm as confused as Harry! Eileen must have been very old when she had Harry! I hope Severus comes in soon.

    Author's Response:

    Hello. She wasn't really too old for a child.

    According to HP wiki Eileen Prince was born between 1932-1943, I've taken 1943, so  when Sev was born, she was 17, just after school, and when Harry was born, she was 37, and now she would have 52 if she wasn't dead. My Tobias like she is 52, or 53. Sev will apperar in 3th chapter (prolog doesn't count) but confrontation between him and Harry will be in 4th

    Thanks for review ;) 

Title: Chapter 1: Surprise 15 Sep 2012 4:40 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    hmmm...very interesting! I wonder what Sev will think of this?

    Author's Response: thank you for review ;) and what do you think, what Sev should think of this? What would be in character?
Title: Chapter 1: Surprise 14 Sep 2012 10:47 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, things moved around really quickly huh? Update soon, can't wait for Snape's entrance. :)

    Author's Response: Thanks, but confrontation Harry-Snape will be in 4th or 5th chapter ;)
Title: Chapter 1: Surprise 14 Sep 2012 2:49 pm
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Signed) [Report This]
    Really enjoying this! Original idea. Also, I worry for Harry...between canon accounts and the subtle signs Tobias is displaying (controlling, concerned about not being "humiliated"), I don't think think this is going to go well...

    (If I'm right, you're doing a really good job of building the situation slowly.)

    Also, you may wish to hint at what Dumbledore's awareness (or lack thereof) of the situation is. It feels a bit peculiar to leave it unsaid.

    In any case, again, really enjoying! I look forward to the next chapter. Post soon? ;)

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy that you noticed that Tobias' signs. And don't worry I'll show what the other characters think of this. I really thought much of plot;) I'll post next chapter in week or two ;)
Title: Chapter 1: Surprise 14 Sep 2012 5:06 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    This is getting favorited...I'm totally intrested to see how Sev is going to react to all this..

    I really Hope Toby isnt gonna be abusive..poor Harry if he is..either way you've gained a fan.

    Author's Response: Thank you ;)
Title: Chapter 1: Surprise 14 Sep 2012 1:14 am
Reviewer: Phoenix5 (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi,
    I like this story so far. But I must say that it has a little mystake, you wrote that Harry was born june 31, in the books, it is july 31.
    If in your story, Harry is born at the and of june, there's no ploblem but june has only 30 days.
    See you soon
    Phoenix 5

    Author's Response: Sorry, It was meant to be july. Thanks for pointing it out and for review!
Title: Chapter 1: Surprise 13 Sep 2012 10:29 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    oh very interesting! when will sev find out!>? lol

    Author's Response: Thank you;) And sorry, but sev will probably in fourth chapter;)
Title: Chapter 1: Surprise 13 Sep 2012 1:47 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I am really enjoying the start of this.

    Author's Response: Thank you;)

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