Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 17: Department of Mysteries 28 May 2022 9:35 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Clever to have the prophecy renew itself. Harry needs to think more deeply into what he is getting into, I’d love to see Dumbledore’s face when he learns what has happened here!
    Thank you for updating.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for review, I'm happy you always leave a comment <3 ;)


Title: Chapter 17: Department of Mysteries 24 May 2022 2:42 am
Reviewer: Synfidie (Signed) [Report This]
    This is an excellent story so far. I don't think I've ever read a brother snape story, so this was an interesting fresh take for me.
    The OC's aren't too bad either and so far tolerable.
    Excited to see where this one is going!

    (Small note, you changed genders on the dept of mystery person by mistake when they were first introduced in the first paragraoh with him)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for your comment<3 

Title: Chapter 17: Department of Mysteries 23 May 2022 3:09 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this twist in the plot. It’s great that Harry has another resource in his fight ahead.

    Author's Response: Thank you <3 
Title: Chapter 17: Department of Mysteries 23 May 2022 3:31 am
Reviewer: dex (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm genuinely shocked Ghost didn't turn out to be a death eater whisking him away to Voldy! I was bracing myself lol! I love that twist. I'm so excited to read more of this. Your handling of just how badly every single adult in his life fumbled the situation from beginning to present is so satisfying! Hopefully Snape (and Sirius? I love your Sirius and hope things look up for him) can prove to be the exception to the rule for Harry.

    Theo becoming Harry's friend is so satisfying. I love stories that insert Draco into the equation, and having Theo is a very refreshing twist!

    Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely comment <3 I'm enjoying your insight!
Title: Chapter 17: Department of Mysteries 22 May 2022 6:36 pm
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Im really interested in this version of events!! Ive always wanted harry to tell them off, and he did. Ive been thinking sirius potions are suspicious and harry took the vials to check! Ive been hoping harry finds a way to do stuff without going theough dumbledore -- honestly the order does NOTHING at all and Harry is the most important part of what they think is their advantage yet none of them care nor even pretend to respect him-- and now Harry has some REAL help. So thanks! Awesome story

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your comment! And I agree completely!

    Also, Just to let you know, there is a new chapter:)

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