| Title: Chapter 20: Kiddnappings' plague
| 19 Jun 2023 11:27 am
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| Reviewer: Nemo (Signed)
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Thank you so much! This is a fantastic story! It has all the right ingredients for this type of fiction but you also bring in new and exciting ideas. I like Severus as Harry’s brother and his initial reluctance to do anything and his growing feeling of responsibility. The pace of your story is really just exactly right. I also love how you included Theo and showed that a friendship between Gryffindors and Slytherins is possible.
I have read this story like two or three times already but for the last chapters I’ll reread it!
I already lost hope for further chapters on this story, but I’m so happy you continue writing.
I’m so excited to know whats inside Eileens mysterious box.
And maybe I’m sick, but I’m looking forward to a last ‘showdown’ between Harry and Tobias before he leaves for Hogwarts. I also hope that Harry and Nott stay friends during the school year.
I’m getting strange vibes from this Rikki guy, although I think thats intended. I anxiously await the time when Severus finds out about the situation.
Long story short… I’m hooked, so pretty please continue. Feels like a cliff hanger right now
| Title: Chapter 20: Kiddnappings' plague
| 13 Aug 2022 4:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Iris (Signed)
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I absolutely love this story! Do you know when you are going to finish it?
congrats on the update! excited to see what comes next. as for hogwarts, I'd love to see more harry and theo...perhaps getting into mischief!
| Title: Chapter 20: Kiddnappings' plague
| 02 Jul 2022 6:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you I loved the description that Severus gave for the magical laws.
| Title: Chapter 20: Kiddnappings' plague
| 01 Jul 2022 1:11 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Thanks for the great chapter. It felt full in a good way. The spell Severus used was creative and a nice way to help as much as he could in the moment. I’m happy to hear that you have a sequel planned! I’d love to see how Theodore navigates having a Muggle girlfriend, if they end up staying together. And I’m hoping that Harry learns to rely more on Severus.
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