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Title: Chapter 21: Diagon Alley 17 Jun 2023 8:11 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    What a great cliffhanger chapter ending! I can’t believe there’s only one more chapter left to your story.
Title: Chapter 21: Diagon Alley 19 Apr 2023 9:15 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for updating. A wonderful chapter but I’m a bit confused, did the bowling take place? A brilliant cliffie to finish, can’t wait for the next chapter

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the review.

    And Answering the question, no, the bowling didn't take place. Severus planned to take the boys, but he was summoned by Voldemort, and Harry didn't know anything about it, and Tobias told him to go to Diagon Alley to do the school shopping. 

Title: Chapter 21: Diagon Alley 19 Apr 2023 6:39 am
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, come ON!!! A cliff hanger???????? Lol

    THANK YOU for the new chapter! I've been eagerly awaiting an update. :D

    Author's Response: Thank you <3
Title: Chapter 21: Diagon Alley 18 Apr 2023 1:09 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you <3
Title: Chapter 21: Diagon Alley 17 Apr 2023 8:50 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah! What a cliffhanger! Fantastic chapter. You're good at dialogue and moving the pace. Good descriptions too.

    I like that Draco is in character, spoiled and envious. Looking to start a fight because he needs attention.

    I like that Harry has a "mystery" to solve. He is far too curious for his own good. But it keeps it feeling like a Harry Potter book since they had mysteries in each one.

    Thanks for the update!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review <3

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