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Reviews For Win The War: Consanguinity
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. And Answering the question, no, the bowling didn't take place. Severus planned to take the boys, but he was summoned by Voldemort, and Harry didn't know anything about it, and Tobias told him to go to Diagon Alley to do the school shopping.
THANK YOU for the new chapter! I've been eagerly awaiting an update. :D Author's Response: Thank you <3
Author's Response: Thank you <3
I like that Draco is in character, spoiled and envious. Looking to start a fight because he needs attention. I like that Harry has a "mystery" to solve. He is far too curious for his own good. But it keeps it feeling like a Harry Potter book since they had mysteries in each one. Thanks for the update! Author's Response: Thanks for the review <3 |
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