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Reviews For Win The War: Consanguinity
(If I'm right, you're doing a really good job of building the situation slowly.) Also, you may wish to hint at what Dumbledore's awareness (or lack thereof) of the situation is. It feels a bit peculiar to leave it unsaid. In any case, again, really enjoying! I look forward to the next chapter. Post soon? ;) Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy that you noticed that Tobias' signs. And don't worry I'll show what the other characters think of this. I really thought much of plot;) I'll post next chapter in week or two ;)
I really Hope Toby isnt gonna be abusive..poor Harry if he is..either way you've gained a fan. Author's Response: Thank you ;)
I like this story so far. But I must say that it has a little mystake, you wrote that Harry was born june 31, in the books, it is july 31. If in your story, Harry is born at the and of june, there's no ploblem but june has only 30 days. See you soon Phoenix 5 Author's Response: Sorry, It was meant to be july. Thanks for pointing it out and for review!
Author's Response: Thank you;) And sorry, but sev will probably in fourth chapter;)
Author's Response: Thank you;)
Author's Response: No way! Really?:P So what will happen?
Author's Response: Thank you, next chapter will be soon ;)
Author's Response: I'll try, thank you ;)
I seriously respect you for writing in another language than your native language; I recall having to write in Spanish when I was taking that class, and it is very daunting writing in another language, so good for you! Keep trying, and it can only get better. Thanks for sharing your writing, and I have to say, I am interested in where you will be going with this ... :) Looking forward to the next chapter! Author's Response: Thank you so much for lon review, it's nice to read it too ;) I actually, study Spanish, but I don't know it real enough yet, but maybe in year or two, I'l translate it into Spanish LOL :P
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