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Title: Chapter 1: Surprise 14 Sep 2012 2:49 pm
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Signed) [Report This]
    Really enjoying this! Original idea. Also, I worry for Harry...between canon accounts and the subtle signs Tobias is displaying (controlling, concerned about not being "humiliated"), I don't think think this is going to go well...

    (If I'm right, you're doing a really good job of building the situation slowly.)

    Also, you may wish to hint at what Dumbledore's awareness (or lack thereof) of the situation is. It feels a bit peculiar to leave it unsaid.

    In any case, again, really enjoying! I look forward to the next chapter. Post soon? ;)

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy that you noticed that Tobias' signs. And don't worry I'll show what the other characters think of this. I really thought much of plot;) I'll post next chapter in week or two ;)
Title: Chapter 1: Surprise 14 Sep 2012 5:06 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    This is getting favorited...I'm totally intrested to see how Sev is going to react to all this..

    I really Hope Toby isnt gonna be abusive..poor Harry if he is..either way you've gained a fan.

    Author's Response: Thank you ;)
Title: Chapter 1: Surprise 14 Sep 2012 1:14 am
Reviewer: Phoenix5 (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi,
    I like this story so far. But I must say that it has a little mystake, you wrote that Harry was born june 31, in the books, it is july 31.
    If in your story, Harry is born at the and of june, there's no ploblem but june has only 30 days.
    See you soon
    Phoenix 5

    Author's Response: Sorry, It was meant to be july. Thanks for pointing it out and for review!
Title: Chapter 1: Surprise 13 Sep 2012 10:29 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    oh very interesting! when will sev find out!>? lol

    Author's Response: Thank you;) And sorry, but sev will probably in fourth chapter;)
Title: Chapter 1: Surprise 13 Sep 2012 1:47 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I am really enjoying the start of this.

    Author's Response: Thank you;)
Title: Prologue: Morning at the Dursley's 12 Sep 2012 9:47 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I think we can guess what will happen next! Thank you for updating

    Author's Response: No way! Really?:P So what will happen?
Title: Prologue: Morning at the Dursley's 11 Sep 2012 10:38 am
Reviewer: Eszther (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for a unique start and a IMO very fitting description of Petunia. I am looking forward to read more from you.

    Author's Response: Thank you, next chapter will be soon ;)
Title: Prologue: Morning at the Dursley's 11 Sep 2012 6:48 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    interesting more please when you can

    Author's Response: I'll try, thank you ;)
Title: Prologue: Morning at the Dursley's 11 Sep 2012 1:43 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, that is so Petunia! I like how you described her life from her eyes. There aren't many stories that include Petunia's point of view, so I have to say that the prologue was certainly enjoyable because of that.
    I seriously respect you for writing in another language than your native language; I recall having to write in Spanish when I was taking that class, and it is very daunting writing in another language, so good for you! Keep trying, and it can only get better. Thanks for sharing your writing, and I have to say, I am interested in where you will be going with this ... :) Looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for lon review, it's nice to read it too ;)

    I actually, study Spanish, but I don't know it real enough yet, but maybe in year or two, I'l translate it into Spanish LOL :P 

Title: Prologue: Morning at the Dursley's 10 Sep 2012 10:51 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a wonderful start. I can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thank you ;) 

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