Thanks for the nice chapter. I hope things get easier for Harry and Severus from here on out.
| Title: Chapter 9
| 03 Nov 2020 5:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you I’ve enjoyed re-reading this story and catching up
Please continue this! This is amazing and I really want to see what you do with it further on.
Noooo! Ended right at the good part!
I know it's been two years, so I have no idea if you are going to continue this story or not, but I can't wait to see if there might be more!
| Title: Chapter 9
| 02 Feb 2017 10:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Just re-read this story it is so good, angst and comedy in one chapter, brilliant, please update if you can. Thanks
I cannot wait to read more!
This is really good! Please, please write some more... (pleading )))
| Title: Chapter 9
| 03 Oct 2015 9:09 am
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Thank you for a great chapter and being correct about the Baron!
Love this story. People are behaving more rationally than in canon... Of course McGonagall would take Harry to the headmaster for permission, rather than to Wood. Of course parental approval would be needed.
Couple of typo/homonym errors in these chapters: site is a location, sight is a view; supper is a meal, super means great. Callus is the physical thing (thickening of the skin) callous means unfeeling. There were a few others like that in these chapters: not many, but they bumped me from the storyline each time.
The story is so good I kept reading, once I got myself back into it. Glad I did! Can't wait to read more!
Great chapter, this! I do like all the minute differences you are making while still retaining many of the events of canon. And naturally, I do love the last bit of this chapter with the reveal and all - it was just beautiful, perfect, and gave me such warm, happy feels.
Eagerly awaiting the next update, you two. Keep up the great work!
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