Potions and Snitches
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Reviews For Second Beginning
Title: Chapter 2 07 Aug 2015 3:19 am
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes! I found the sequel! I read the first one on fanfiction.net. And loved it, this one is starting off great too. Glad that your feeling better
Title: Chapter 2 10 Mar 2015 12:53 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Can't wait to read more! Please update again soon! :)
Title: Chapter 1 04 Oct 2013 8:06 am
Reviewer: holly (Anonymous) [Report This]
    it is really good

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 10 Feb 2013 6:47 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi SammySnapeWolf! Well, I'm a sucker for de-aging, so I thought I'd give this a try. It is intriguing, so far. I liked the description of Harry playing around with the sparks. It seemed like the perfect activity for boredom! I noticed though that you switched from past tense to present tense when saying "Lately, he has grown to where ..." etc. Technically it should be past tense, to be consistent. It's tricky sometimes, I know. :) It took me a long time to get a good handle on tense, and I'm still not even close to perfect. Other than that, lovely! I am looking forward to the next chapter, and watching a disaster unfold! Cheers!

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, I sometimes have trouble with that, but I'm still a beginner, am I'm working on getting better. :)

    im glad you like it, and I'm working on the next chapter now. :3 

Title: Chapter 1 09 Feb 2013 11:19 pm
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    i'm looking forward to reading this sequel and learning about the deaging. has it already happened or is it in the future? if it already happened, what was the outcome?

    Author's Response: (Spoiler!) it's coming in the next chapter. I'm working on it now and will hopefully have it up soon. Thank you! :D

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