Hi SammySnapeWolf! Well, I'm a sucker for de-aging, so I thought I'd give this a try. It is intriguing, so far. I liked the description of Harry playing around with the sparks. It seemed like the perfect activity for boredom! I noticed though that you switched from past tense to present tense when saying "Lately, he has grown to where ..." etc. Technically it should be past tense, to be consistent. It's tricky sometimes, I know. :) It took me a long time to get a good handle on tense, and I'm still not even close to perfect. Other than that, lovely! I am looking forward to the next chapter, and watching a disaster unfold! Cheers!
Yeah, I sometimes have trouble with that, but I'm still a beginner, am I'm working on getting better. :)
im glad you like it, and I'm working on the next chapter now. :3