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Title: Paying By The Hour 28 Feb 2015 5:41 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Glad Snape is finally working things out in his own mind concerning Harry and his misperceptions about the boy's home life. But the thing in the water... Please don't let it be the body of a poor drowned cat. :-(
Title: Paying By The Hour 20 Jul 2014 3:55 pm
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    You know I just realized that it's a really good thing they got out the auditorium cause the oxygen would have been consumed after a while.
Title: Paying By The Hour 15 May 2013 9:50 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought it might be the cat that Harry tried to save but the thing is under the water!
Title: Paying By The Hour 11 May 2013 11:13 pm
Reviewer: rusulka7 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loving the story, and I really don't want to poke holes because it enjoyable as it is, but one thing I don't understand is why they cant use a warming charm to combat the cold and even send a patronus to give their location..?

    Author's Response:

    It's ok, there's really no holes you can poke at this point.  1) A heating charm would be too easy and it doesn't have to exist in a story.  If we use magic to fix everything then there's really nothing to write about.  2) Who's to say that Dumbledore taught his staff how to use a patronus at this point?  The books only say that he came up with this way to use them, but I do not believe it says when he taught his staff or when he came up with it.  Even if Dumbledore did know Snape and Harry's location, there's no guarantee that there's a good way for a human to get to them.  At this point all they know is that there was an airpath large enough to get an inhaler to them.

    3) (Though you didn't ask rusulka7, this is addressing other reviewers questions): They can't get out via floo because Hogwarts isn't connected to the Floo Network.  That's why Dumbledore had to use Fawks to get out when he escaped in his office from Umbridge.

     

    Thanks for your review (and thank you to the rest of the reviewers as well).

Title: Paying By The Hour 11 May 2013 1:21 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter. Thanks for the update.

    So, What's in the water? The room/openings are probably to small for the squid. But other than that--We know there are Merfolk in the lake, also grindilow (sp) and other trouble makers. But based on this flood, it could be something else--Selkie could be fun--especially if they are able to help. What about an Abaia--that could even help explain the flood. . . but I'm guessing you already have that planned out. A Fossie Grim probably wouldn't be much help--could cause a bunch of trouble actually. And, I suppose if you wanted to wanter into Arthurian legends, It could be the Lady of the Lake. So many choices? Just what will you choose? I am most currious.

    Thanks again for the update.
    V.
Title: Paying By The Hour 10 May 2013 11:36 pm
Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmm...interesting chapter. Well, honestly I don't know if you really have a plan for getting Snape and Harry out of this mess, but this thing in the water could help you along there. It could be a danger, helping to keep them trapped, or it could help them get out. It could be a friendly water creature, that would help pull them out of there. You can definitely use it.
Title: Paying By The Hour 10 May 2013 11:32 pm
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    In the water could be a merperson or a fish, which would solve their hunger problem. If it was a mer-person then they could help them to safety.
Title: Paying By The Hour 10 May 2013 9:50 pm
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh a mermaid maybe? Perhaps the giant squid? Sure it is huge but they are invertebrates and pretty good at squeezing into tight spots. Intriguing end to the chapter! More soon, please!
Title: Paying By The Hour 10 May 2013 8:45 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    lol I bet there is something in the water. Harry will keep seeing it from the corner of his eye and Severus will keep denying that he really saw anything until he is pulled down into the water from it. Harry helps get the thing off and then says "told you so" and a panicked on the inside but scowling face on the outside Severus will be like "when we get out of here Potter you will be in detention for weeks" but thinking 'what was that crap Potter was right'.

    I think it could be a mermaid or inferi
Title: Paying By The Hour 10 May 2013 7:36 pm
Reviewer: Wandacarla (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay so happy to see a new chapter. At first I thought it was a ghost but then why not come up and say hi? Maybe it's merpeople from the lake...anyway I can not wait for another update and I'm happy to see Snape finally figuring out the truth! (:

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