| Title: Breaking The Rules
| 07 May 2015 4:54 am
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| Reviewer: Mugiwara (Anonymous)
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I enjoyed this story for the most part, but Harry's personality reads like he's younger than he's supposed to be... Maybe 12—13
Author's Response: That is good feedback to have. Thanks for taking the time to let me know. I'll have to go back and take a look at it again. I know he has been very immature about things at this point considdering the things he's done. I have known teenage boys who have done immature things like that though, even when they are not always immature in other areas of their lives... heh, I've even known grown men to do some pretty immature things.
| Title: Breaking The Rules
| 28 Feb 2015 6:05 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Draco the hero! And yay for Hagrid! Also, loved the fish-- totally cool! At least the owls survived, but with the floodwaters, they'll have a hard time hunting their own food. (You've probably figured out by now that I'm an animal lover!) What about Hogsmeade? Is it also flooded out?
| Title: Breaking The Rules
| 20 Aug 2013 4:14 am
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| Reviewer: guest (Anonymous)
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I just adore this! It gives me goose bumps. Please update soon!
| Title: Breaking The Rules
| 06 Jul 2013 11:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Why doesn't snape send a patronus with a message to dumbedore, telling him where they are? Even if they have limited brooms, why don't they send someone to explore the extent of the flooding? Search for additional provisions? Look for survivors? Try to find more brooms? It's as if they have no sense and no magic. And wouldn't Snape risk a bit of broken glass if the second or third vial might come back unharmed? Especially to save a life. Why is everyone acting so helpless? Especially the staff, without even organizing one rescue mission on a broom...
Author's Response: Some of the staff are missing leaving them shorthanded for one thing. Dumbledore has Hooch out on broom already, but there's only so much she can do. Just because it hasn't been said yet, doesn't mean that she hasn't already done several sweeps of the area looking for people, and especially out looking for the errant Draco. Just because you don't like how they handle the situation doesn't mean that they're senseless. As for the patronus, in this story they don't send messages via patronus, it's not magic that's a part of this story. It wouldn't be much of a story now would it, if everybody just magicked themselves out of danger. That would be a one chapter story that nobody likes or cares to read about. And no, Severus sees no reason at all to call potions in glass phials to him that he is positive will break, that would be wasting good potions that other people could be using if they're in need. How many potions do you suggest he calls to himself before he quits because they've all broken?
| Title: Breaking The Rules
| 10 Jun 2013 9:53 am
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| Reviewer: Jen77 (Anonymous)
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What about the house elves? Are they dead? Couldn't Dobby help them?
Oooh I like this so far, would love to read more :)
Oooh I like this so far, would love to read more :)
This fic is awesome!!! I can't wait to read more! Hope you update soon :D
Cheers~
| Title: Breaking The Rules
| 15 May 2013 10:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thought I wouldn't like this chapter but it is very good thank you
| Title: Breaking The Rules
| 13 May 2013 10:03 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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Dang Well done Draco I know why he is doing it but it take curage to face a fear and he is.well doen more when you can hun thank you.
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