Just discovered this one from the challenge. Well done. Atmosphere is creepy enough and I want to know what's happening?
I think it is all tying in nicely together.
Plus....did the cat survive?!?
| Title: What Lurks In The Deep
| 29 Oct 2018 6:58 am
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| Reviewer: suzn18 (Signed)
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Ohhhh I hope you will continue this story. I think it is very good so far!
Noooooooooooo. Why must the story stop there? Oh, I really hope you'll update, despite the three year hiatus. This story is BRILLIANT, and a one of a kind. I've never read another like it. I am loving Snape and Harry braving illness and the elements together, with Snape very slowly coming to realize he might not have known Harry as well as he thought he did... You are superb, a goddess among authors, and I would so love to see your little masterpiece come to its conclusion.
Okay Love it its very well written out and I can't it to see if one day its continued
| Title: What Lurks In The Deep
| 29 Aug 2015 1:52 pm
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| Reviewer: woodyt (Signed)
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Love it can't wait for the next chapter do you plan on continuing or have you abandoned it.
I am finding this to be a rather fascinating story, and like how it is progressing thus far. I hope that there will be more.
| Title: What Lurks In The Deep
| 25 Mar 2015 6:12 pm
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| Reviewer: T.A.S. (Anonymous)
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Good fic, but there is a major plot hole that needs to be covered (other than where all that water came from): Why not just call a house elf? They can teleport within the wards, and across distances. Malfoy, for instance, has some at home... And of the other Slytherins the same is likely. May want to cover that hole.
Also, communication by patronus. From what has been shown in the books there shouldn't be any hindrance to a patronus travelling through solid substances...
Author's Response: Hi there, thanks for your review and your concern about the plot. I've already addressed these issues however both in reveiws and author's notes. I'll say it again though. If they were able to snap their fingers and 'poof' all problems were solved, then there would be no story beyond the very first chapter, which is why I haven't had the characters do these things.
| Title: What Lurks In The Deep
| 28 Feb 2015 6:31 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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A Kappa. Now we know. An excellent observation that water changes how we perceive our familiar surroundings. Hope Snape is okay, and that he and Harry can find higher ground soon. Surely there have to be stairways leading upward...
| Title: What Lurks In The Deep
| 20 Feb 2015 6:51 pm
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| Reviewer: GothDyke (Anonymous)
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Awww! You can't leave me - and Harry - hanging like this. Snape has to survive. And will Draco eventually find them? And I am really, really curious what happened to cause the flood and why there is no response from the Ministry...
So, please, make my day with an update.
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