Very good story so far. Nasty cliffhanger though. Update soon.
I do not like cliff hangers...it's so good to see the other Natural Disasters stories out there...I tend to get motivated when I read them and then I start typing...
*Goes to continue writing Volcano*
Keep up the good work!
Title: What Lurks In The Deep
| 08 Oct 2013 12:30 pm
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Anonymous)
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Love the photo
BTW Why can't Albus send Fawkes for food? A phoenix can lift a lot of weight (canon), so why not have him raid a muggle grocery for bread & fruit with an expanded basket/bag? Or at least have Fawkes 'flame' people to the drier parts of the castle?
Ah! I don't know why, but I was beginning to think that the monster was actually good. Obviously, I was dreadfully wrong, since it's tried to drown Harry and choke Severus. :( Oh well, lol. Keep the chapters coming JA. Thanks for sharing your stories!
Title: What Lurks In The Deep
| 08 Oct 2013 2:54 am
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Reviewer: Fen impersonating HP (Anonymous)
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Update FoBD
...okay, I'm reading the chapter now, lol. Thanks for posting JA! XD
Oh Merlin, I hope Sev is alright and will join Harry again. Concerning the photo, it really fits you story :) Thanks for sharing this with us and of course for updating! It always brightens my day if I read an awesome fic like yours! Cheers!
Title: What Lurks In The Deep
| 07 Oct 2013 11:08 am
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Reviewer: HPfan impersonating Fen (Anonymous)
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Title: What Lurks In The Deep
| 07 Oct 2013 10:20 am
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Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous)
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Thank you for another chapter. The Kappa seems to be getting the best of Snape - I hope he can get rid of it.
Title: What Lurks In The Deep
| 06 Oct 2013 10:47 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely that you are continuing this story. I love the photo it is very like Hogwarts.
geez what is going to happen next thanks for continuing. All three versions of this challenge stopped at the same time leaving us hanging but again thanks for continuing.
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