| Title: A Snape Kind Of Night
| 25 Apr 2013 8:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Svarra (Anonymous)
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Why doesn't Harry accio his broom like he did in Goblet of Fire? It seems like there is a giant plot hole in that it seems the characters have all collectively forgotten that there are brooms in towers that aren't flooded.
Maybe this will be explained later?
| Title: Not That Strong
| 25 Apr 2013 8:05 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Just wondering why they can't use a patronus to summon help? Great chapter thank you
| Title: Floundering
| 25 Apr 2013 7:58 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter loved the flashback perhaps more of those?
| Title: A Snape Kind Of Night
| 23 Apr 2013 10:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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| Title: Into The Night
| 23 Apr 2013 9:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great start thank you good tension and IC
Awesome I can't wait to find out what happens next! (:
| Title: Not That Strong
| 22 Apr 2013 4:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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About Jewish and other nations WWII prisoners. You are partly right. When American and Soviets were liberating prisoners, they were giving them they rations whatever that was food, normally Americans chocolate and Soviets canned meat. Chocolate was in fact letting them live long enough to receive other help because it was nutritious but wasn't upsetting they bowel. Canned meat was the caused of bowel spasm and dead. My greet-grandfather survived because of American chocolate. I'm sorry if my explanation is not very clear. Obviously I'm not a native speaker.
Nevertheless I want to say I love this story, I love all of them ;)
| Title: Not That Strong
| 21 Apr 2013 7:11 am
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| Reviewer: Slytherin_Serpent (Anonymous)
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very interesting
cant wait for the next chapter
Oh, and i was surprised it is two and half months into the year. I thought it was september-Harry complained about having detention already before he got stronger.
Author's Response: Harry's strength was still pretty depleted because he still wasn't eating three meals a day. After your body has been starved, it takes some time to work back up to a regular diet. A lot of the Jewish prisoners from WWII were dying when the American's came in and liberated them becuase the soldiers were giving them rations or chocolate to eat after they'd been starved, and their bodies couldn't process it so they died right after being liberated. It mentioned that Harry's been working up slowly to two meals a day, then he was just ready to try three when the flood hit.
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