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Title: Floundering 18 Apr 2013 11:35 am
Reviewer: Aprella (Signed) [Report This]
    ooh this is a promising story! Can't wait to read more!
Title: Floundering 18 Apr 2013 11:19 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Harry ... look what you've done now. I liked how Snape was getting a bit hysterical too, and how Harry's confusion started to settle in from exhaustion and hunger. The shock of it all probably got to him too. Then there was the the comment about Ron giving birth to a brick ... that had me busting a gut. Hilarious. And by the way, I think that considering the Gryffindors and Slytherins are sharing a common room, Harry and Snape might be better off where they are!

    Author's Response:

    Lol, yeah that was my very polite way of saying that Ron s**t a brick lol.  And yeah, they just might be better off there lol.  Glad you're enjoying it :)

Title: Floundering 18 Apr 2013 11:08 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    sev is gonna end up forceing harry into a flash back hmmm. then he will know. more please when you can thank you.
Title: Floundering 18 Apr 2013 10:57 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape is wrong you know, Harry is worth all the trouble.

    I enjoyed watching you write. But I still can't fathom how you can just crank out a story like this.

    Oh, and Luck has some ideas for you about the flooding! It's really good, though you might need to scale it up some for a big flood like this.
Title: Floundering 18 Apr 2013 10:48 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    You are on fire with your updates. :)
Title: A Snape Kind Of Night 18 Apr 2013 10:43 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape is so incredibly aggravating. I love him but sometimes I want to smack him. Hmm...I wonder why the school is flooding :P

    Very good 2nd chapter. Hope Harry gets some food in him soon.
Title: A Snape Kind Of Night 18 Apr 2013 10:40 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    I still want to know what cause the school to flood. That be some weather :P.
    I wouldn't mind seeing a chapter with the other students or maybe how the Slytherins reacted when Harry disappeared and what they are thinking right now. Maybe the other Grifindors.
    I want Snape to see that Harry is mistreated during the summer and after spending time with him and seeing the real Harry not James's son that I hope in the end when if they all survive he takes Harry in.
Title: A Snape Kind Of Night 18 Apr 2013 10:24 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    maybe them find another student or animal on there way, or have harry use some secrect passagw ay snape dosen't know about toget them higher up. more please!
Title: Into The Night 18 Apr 2013 10:22 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    whole crap. Where did all the water come from and where did Harry go? I am so glad you have chapter 2 up already.
Title: A Snape Kind Of Night 18 Apr 2013 9:55 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the image of Harry falling into the rowboat and laughing. That definitely would be his response, I think. The dynamic between Snape and Harry is good as well. No wonder Harry is having such a tough time rowing though, having been starved all summer. The descriptions are great - it sure sounds like this flood is a bad one. But where is all the water coming from? And let us hope the giant squid doesn't come knocking! Oh, and couldn't they used aguamenti to get fresh water to drink, at least? Harry wouldn't know the charm yet, though, but Snape would. Although, he probably wasn't paying much attention to Harry's complaint.
    Good thing they found shelter. Lets hope the water doesn't rise any, otherwise they'll be in a pretty bad state! Of course ... I suppose they could use bubblehead charms long enough to get out, but it would be a heck of a swim! Anyway, enough rambling ... great chapter!

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