| Title: Into The Night
| 18 Apr 2013 9:27 am
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| Reviewer: Karis (Anonymous)
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I really like this story so far! Hehe, classic Harry and his "saving people thing."
JA Worley, I've found your stories are always very well written. I'm looking forward to more of this one!
What a treat! I can't believe yet another person answered the challenge! Oh my, and what a good start too! Totally gripping, and now I'm asking myself what started it all! I liked how Harry saved Draco. It is definitely fitting of Draco's character and background that he can't swim. Besides, when would a posh pureblood have to learn anyway? I love your banner too, by the way. Just looking at it really set the scene for the story, and as I was reading I felt like I was there. I also really liked how Harry discovered the flood. Definitely worth a ten! I am super excited for more!
Author's Response: Awesome! I haven't decided what started the flood yet. Ch 2 is posted though! Thanks for the challenge!
You've done it again, JA. Great writing, great descriptions of the scene, the actions and emotions. A suspenseful start, intersected by bit of humour. I love it from top to bottom. I hope you keep up the humour, you've done a really great job here with it. Malfoy floating on a table, his disgruntled reaction at having to share it with a cat. Oh the imagery! LOL. A+
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