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Title: Chapter 4: Who will Save the Children? 29 Apr 2013 11:33 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very exciting story!

    Author's Response: You're very welcome! Thank for liking it and Reviewing :)
Title: Chapter 4: Who will Save the Children? 28 Apr 2013 10:56 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    ARG! Pretty much a literal cliff hanger! Well ... that escalated quickly. ;) Here I'm thinking - oh, they might have a chance. Oh, it's just gas so far. And then BAM! Lava! Yikes, I would not want to be them right now! And Snape - I sure as heck hope he wasn't too late to save Amanda. Although, Severus Draconis Potter, I would not put it past to kill her off, my evil compadre. ;) Oh, and I liked Ron's pet name.

    Author's Response:

    I didnt want to drag it out, because I knew what was going to happen to her. And prolonging it had me a bit sad and sniffling over my keyboard. I changed her fate twice if it helps, so I'm kind of sorry leaving a cliff hanger. But on the bright side...At least we're into the Harry and Snape action right? Thats gotta cancel out right? lol, 

     Aww thanks,  :) I'm glad you like it though! 

Title: Chapter 4: Who will Save the Children? 28 Apr 2013 2:38 am
Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh wow, what a cliff-hanger!
    GREAT story!

    Author's Response: Thanks? I'm so glad you liked it
Title: Chapter 4: Who will Save the Children? 27 Apr 2013 9:03 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG! What an ending. I hope you update soon.

    Author's Response: I will, dont worry
Title: Chapter 4: Who will Save the Children? 27 Apr 2013 8:54 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    stupid Slytherin I thought they were supposed to have brains. They are turning into stupid reckless Gryfindors (not that its bad all the time but in the case oh yeah).
    OMG COME ON what kind of ending is that? That is by far one of the worst cliffhangers I have ever read. I know someone will save her. I mean Wingardium Leviosa or someone will fly by on a broom or something but seriously give Amanda and Harry heart attacks and man if something happens to Amanda Harry will blame himself.

    Author's Response:

    They're only 13, and they don believe a man who their parents all have an issue with. Dont blame the kids, even if they are a bit stupid. But children will be children.

     Worse as in, you didnt like it, or extremely cruel. And i wouldnt be so sure, I used to cater to the readers but now I write for myself so she may or may not live. Her fate has changed twice already and I'm nearly done with the next chapter. Who has time for wingardiium leviosa, when Severus was the only one near them. Chances are hes fighting Harry so the child wont run off the cliff to try to save her. Its out of there hands, all I can say is wait until the next chapter.

Title: Chapter 4: Who will Save the Children? 27 Apr 2013 3:56 pm
Reviewer: Arashi (Signed) [Report This]
    Ugh, those poor Slytherins who hid in the dungeon from Snape. You certainly have a way of showing the family drama, well done. Fred and George going to find Harry then Ron that is bravery not to mention reckless. I love the suspense and can hardly wait to learn the fate of Amanda.

    Author's Response: But their Gryffindors, of course they'll do that. And Ron as Jealous as he was, I always have a soft spot for him. He wont meet Harry on the way, so more drama on the way. I'm glad you like it thought.
Title: Chapter 4: Who will Save the Children? 27 Apr 2013 2:07 pm
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    omg! poor mandy! snape has his wand right tell he has it!

    Author's Response: He has it, but he wont be able to save her.
Title: Chapter 4: Who will Save the Children? 27 Apr 2013 8:26 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Gaaaah! *holds up a pie* She had better not die. I've NEVER left a cliffie like that! 0.0 Still, kudos on a good chapter. And if those Slytherin 3rd years survive, they need a spanking.

    Author's Response: *Hides behind a table* Well youre cliffys have been pretty bad to say the least. lol, they definitly do. She may or may not, we will see next Chapter. lol

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