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Reviews For Eruption!
Author's Response: You're very welcome! Thank for liking it and Reviewing :)
Author's Response: I didnt want to drag it out, because I knew what was going to happen to her. And prolonging it had me a bit sad and sniffling over my keyboard. I changed her fate twice if it helps, so I'm kind of sorry leaving a cliff hanger. But on the bright side...At least we're into the Harry and Snape action right? Thats gotta cancel out right? lol, Aww thanks, :) I'm glad you like it though!
GREAT story! Author's Response: Thanks? I'm so glad you liked it
Author's Response: I will, dont worry
OMG COME ON what kind of ending is that? That is by far one of the worst cliffhangers I have ever read. I know someone will save her. I mean Wingardium Leviosa or someone will fly by on a broom or something but seriously give Amanda and Harry heart attacks and man if something happens to Amanda Harry will blame himself. Author's Response: They're only 13, and they don believe a man who their parents all have an issue with. Dont blame the kids, even if they are a bit stupid. But children will be children. Worse as in, you didnt like it, or extremely cruel. And i wouldnt be so sure, I used to cater to the readers but now I write for myself so she may or may not live. Her fate has changed twice already and I'm nearly done with the next chapter. Who has time for wingardiium leviosa, when Severus was the only one near them. Chances are hes fighting Harry so the child wont run off the cliff to try to save her. Its out of there hands, all I can say is wait until the next chapter.
Author's Response: But their Gryffindors, of course they'll do that. And Ron as Jealous as he was, I always have a soft spot for him. He wont meet Harry on the way, so more drama on the way. I'm glad you like it thought.
Author's Response: He has it, but he wont be able to save her.
Author's Response: *Hides behind a table* Well youre cliffys have been pretty bad to say the least. lol, they definitly do. She may or may not, we will see next Chapter. lol |
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