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Title: Chapter 10: Where do we go From Here? 18 May 2014 3:29 am
Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This chapter made me cry. Amazing, as always.

    Author's Response: I'm sorry it made you cry but I'm glad you liked it.!
Title: Chapter 10: Where do we go From Here? 26 Mar 2014 7:55 pm
Reviewer: Gryffinclaw (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank-you for updating! Great chapter. Love the Sirius/Severus interaction. Also love the Weasleys and Draco. Can't wait to see how you end this.

    Author's Response: It's all gonna come togeher I promise. I'm so glad you like it though.
Title: Chapter 10: Where do we go From Here? 25 Mar 2014 7:11 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter you are so skilful at bringing the threads together. Please let Dean be OK

    Author's Response: Dean is alive, fine though? I dont know...he witnessed 2 people die, how does one cope..we shall see.. thanks for reading
Title: Chapter 10: Where do we go From Here? 23 Mar 2014 7:42 am
Reviewer: mysinger (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic story! Poor Dean to see his best friend die like that. Good for Neville and Percy! You showed the nobility in Percy that we didn't get to see in canon until book seven. I liked the scenes in Dumbledore's office, as well as how they used the Marauders Map in the rescue effort. Well done!

    Author's Response: Yeah, well...he'll be able to see a Thestral...but yea I hve to agree. How does one deal with that grief, your best ya know? I love Neville really, and Percy while I kinda didnt like him until the 7th book I couldnt let a Weasely die. He had the nobility, but will he have the courage to fight when he finally wakes up and realizes his situation? Anyway, i'm glad you like it.
Title: Chapter 10: Where do we go From Here? 22 Mar 2014 10:44 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Good to see a few more students getting out safely. Now I really want to know the final tally of who makes it, and if Hogwarts itself will survive.

    Author's Response: Well in the last book, Hogwarts was broken, but they rebuilt..so the same here i think...the tally isn't so much I dnt think, I dont know yet actually lol.. Everyone is coming together though
Title: Chapter 10: Where do we go From Here? 22 Mar 2014 10:18 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    yeah an update THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU
    Anyways: Why can't they see Dean and the first year on the map? They are still technically on the castle and the map shows part of the grounds too right?
    Poor Draco he needs someone there for him too Fred should have taken him along who cares about family rivalry. Harry will be that someone i'm sure. Ahh so much more I want to know.

    Author's Response:

    You're welcome, I love this story, It's a wild ride and everything goes! lol. 

     Because they were looking over the map quickly, and this point, focusing on getting the precious cargo on their backs to safety.  Fred should have taken him, there will be consequences for that of coourse, make no mistake that all is well with that front. I hope the next chapter helps a bit 

Title: Chapter 10: Where do we go From Here? 22 Mar 2014 6:59 pm
Reviewer: Kris (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I do wish that the Weasley boys had taken Draco with them. It is horrible that he was left at Hogwarts 'to wait' for his family to get him. There is no reason why he couldn't have been fetched from St. Mungos instead. Lucius and Arthur would just have to get over their idiotic feud for a few hours at most.

    Author's Response: I know, they should have taken him. He needed the comfort, but becase they didnt it reinforced something in him, and the consequences of those choses wont be known just yet, but it's coming. 

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