| Title: Chapter 19: Mourning and Set Backs
| 04 Mar 2016 9:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a good chapter but not happy with all the slang you are using as not British! I can't imagine Bill ever saying yo!
Author's Response: Well, it seemed like something he would say regardless. And given the wide assortment of accents the whole of the UK has, he's bound to have picked up something. It's fanfic so I'm okay with that.
| Title: Chapter 19: Mourning and Set Backs
| 04 Mar 2016 3:10 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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The aftermath of the disaster is so hard for everyone to deal with. I'm glad you're not making things suddenly turn rosy, although it was nice to see a glimmer of hope for the future in Percy's attitude.
Author's Response: I know, evrything is always okay. Thanks for understanding that as alot of people are telling me to save him. In life unforntually not everyone can be saved
| Title: Chapter 19: Mourning and Set Backs
| 03 Mar 2016 6:53 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Wooow. This is such a dramatic story. Great emotional writing. Please continue when you feel you can. Thank you for creating and sharing it with us thus far. :)
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