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Title: Chapter 5: An Unexpected Savior 13 May 2013 3:30 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I never would have guessed that Sirius would come to the rescue. Unexpected is right!

    Author's Response: but i kept subtly hinting that it was third year. lol we all know what happened that year 
Title: Chapter 5: An Unexpected Savior 08 May 2013 10:12 pm
Reviewer: Arashi (Signed) [Report This]
    Sirius entering the picture is a nice touch. I am happy that Amanda survived the fall. The story has my full attention and I look forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: So am I, her first fate I had killed her off but I couldnt stop crying, so I changed it. I'm glad you werent dismayed about me adding Sirius
Title: Chapter 5: An Unexpected Savior 07 May 2013 3:28 pm
Reviewer: Lilyflower5 (Signed) [Report This]
    I think this is your best story keep the chapters comming

    Author's Response: Dont worry I will, my muse is really ignoring all my other stories for right now. I really excited that you enjoyed it
Title: Chapter 5: An Unexpected Savior 07 May 2013 1:58 pm
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    yay! shes alive poor harry good for you sev!

    Author's Response: Of course, I felt extremely bad. I tend to get attached to my characters and she was no different.
Title: Chapter 5: An Unexpected Savior 07 May 2013 7:16 am
Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! What a chapter! The names vanishing from the registry book was a master stroke! So very tragic to see the names disappear and have no idea what happened to them, other than knowing it was lethal.

    Author's Response: COuld you just imagine how that must have felt? Poor Albus
Title: Chapter 5: An Unexpected Savior 07 May 2013 3:25 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope his realization about his stupidity toward Amanda allows him to be more accepting of Severus. I'm glad I read to the end of this chapter, because I was close to getting upset when it appeared as if the little girl died.

    Author's Response: Hopefully, but Sirius was always a bit thickheaded. Sorry, but if it makes you feel any better, I was extremely upset when I first had her not survive the fall. I couldnt take that much angst. But, her fate is the only one safe, there will be casualties, and I'm not really looking forward to writing them. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter though. Thanks for reading and reviews!
Title: Chapter 5: An Unexpected Savior 07 May 2013 2:12 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah Sirius to the rescue. I think its weird yet cute that Harry will not let go Severus and go to Remus. Lets hope that it is Draco and Ron at the headmasters door so they can get to the Slytherins but should they be gone already since their common room in the dungeons? Or for your story you making all the houses in a tower?
    Anyways that was good happy chapter

    Author's Response: It is of course, Im sorry I wasnt clear. Slytherin is in the Dungeons, but I was unsure of whether or not they called it a tower..lol ooops
Title: Chapter 4: Who will Save the Children? 29 Apr 2013 11:33 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very exciting story!

    Author's Response: You're very welcome! Thank for liking it and Reviewing :)
Title: Chapter 4: Who will Save the Children? 28 Apr 2013 10:56 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    ARG! Pretty much a literal cliff hanger! Well ... that escalated quickly. ;) Here I'm thinking - oh, they might have a chance. Oh, it's just gas so far. And then BAM! Lava! Yikes, I would not want to be them right now! And Snape - I sure as heck hope he wasn't too late to save Amanda. Although, Severus Draconis Potter, I would not put it past to kill her off, my evil compadre. ;) Oh, and I liked Ron's pet name.

    Author's Response:

    I didnt want to drag it out, because I knew what was going to happen to her. And prolonging it had me a bit sad and sniffling over my keyboard. I changed her fate twice if it helps, so I'm kind of sorry leaving a cliff hanger. But on the bright side...At least we're into the Harry and Snape action right? Thats gotta cancel out right? lol, 

     Aww thanks,  :) I'm glad you like it though! 

Title: Chapter 4: Who will Save the Children? 28 Apr 2013 2:38 am
Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh wow, what a cliff-hanger!
    GREAT story!

    Author's Response: Thanks? I'm so glad you liked it

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