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Title: Chapter 13: Picking up the pieces and Rebuilding 22 Jun 2014 10:02 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I didn't cry although I came near to it! What stopped me was my anger with the adults dealing with Harry! They all need to be educated on how to look after an emotional child!
    Thank you a great chapter
Title: Chapter 13: Picking up the pieces and Rebuilding 21 Jun 2014 11:46 pm
Reviewer: WhoKnows (Signed) [Report This]
    amazing fantastic! loved it cant wait for le update

    Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 13: Picking up the pieces and Rebuilding 19 Jun 2014 4:08 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    You're doing a good job with this. Even though the drama of the eruption is over there is still plenty going on, and not just between Harry and Snape. I did think Albus' 'joke' was in poor taste considering the circumstances - perhaps he's losing it.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! The survivors need to survive and sadly the grief is far from over. This is a slight reprieve from it. He wasn't joking though thats the thing, at the moment he really did feel inadquate at having failed his students.  And was resigning right there It was just the cries of outrage at the Ministry that had him quickly retracting his statement. After all he's the reason the Dark Lord was afraid of attacking Hogwarts while he was alive. He's grieving too, and he's prepared to take the burden that so many parents can't carry. Its all very sad but he's got the toughest job of all I think.

     

    Anyway thanks for your awesome review! 

Title: Chapter 13: Picking up the pieces and Rebuilding 19 Jun 2014 7:38 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus needs to wake up and realize that HE is the one that Harry needs (and wants). The sooner he realizes it, the better for Harry's well-being!
Title: Chapter 13: Picking up the pieces and Rebuilding 19 Jun 2014 5:49 am
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    You are brilliant! I can't wait to see how you handle Snape and Harry. I love your formatting and creativity. :)
Title: Chapter 13: Picking up the pieces and Rebuilding 19 Jun 2014 2:15 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    In fact this is probably the first chapter I didn't cry. :)
    Harry is going to break down and explode at someone soon if he doesn't grieve. Severus needs to sit him down glued to the chair and tell him that he is not allowed to leave said chair till he grieves cause how is a volcano his fault.
Title: Chapter 12: The Ministry, St. Mungos, and Condolences 06 Jun 2014 1:17 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter! I especially liked the scene between Charles and Remus. Harry seems to be becoming younger in each scene is this deliberate?

    Author's Response: Yeah, I had to wonder not all Death Eaters were like Lucius...and yes good on you for noticing. It's deliberate, hes trying to Cope, but at the same time push away and bury it like he's used to. I have this huge scene planned between him, Sirius and Severus planned in which everything blows up figuratively speaking. Just please be patient with him.
Title: Chapter 12: The Ministry, St. Mungos, and Condolences 03 Jun 2014 2:27 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Could Fudge be any dumber? How hard is it to understand that a VOLCANO erupted and destroyed Hogwarts?

    Theo is lucky to have a father that loves him enough to let him go. I think he knows that Theo, especially now that he is probably permanently disabled, will be far safer far away from Voldemort.

    Poor Dean....it sucks that he has had to be the bearer of so much bad news! I am glad that Dumbledore showed up in time to prevent Harry from having to witness the grief of the parents whose children died...

    Author's Response:

    Well he was always a bit slow....wonder which house he was in..hmm..

     

    I know, Theo needs all the help he can get, as for Dean I think I would I would shatter. I wouldnt be able to be that strong..then again I'm not a Gryffindor. I know the last thing Harry needed is more guilt, besides he needs to heal too. So much coming up, I planned on 2 more chapters after this one, but my muse is ignoring me. It should be finished by 20 though. Hoping.

Title: Chapter 12: The Ministry, St. Mungos, and Condolences 02 Jun 2014 4:27 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Another good chapter,so sad to find out some of the names of children who didn't make it. Dean is certainly showing why he was sorted into Gryffindor.

    Author's Response: I know, but casualties are apart of Natural Disasters unfortunatly. I'm glad you liked it and reviewed!
Title: Chapter 12: The Ministry, St. Mungos, and Condolences 02 Jun 2014 8:22 am
Reviewer: Magykrider (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story so much, but it is soooo freaking sad. Everytime you update, I feel like re-reading the whole thing, but it's just so sad.
    I guess that makes you a good writer, doesn't it?

    Author's Response: Yeah i understand, I hope so, well I'm not happy it makes you sad...but if it helps. I'm sad as I write it...mostly sob as I type, then take a breather and go back and sob and write some more. I thank you for the compliment..I think lol. Anyway thanks for the review it means alot.

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