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Reviews For Windowsill Confessions
Author's Response: I've been struggling with writing anything lately, so even thinking of a sequel at this point is a lot of work. I've recently made a few breakthroughs with writing, which will hopefully continue. Thank you for reading this, and letting me know what you liked about it, and that you are interested in a sequel. If the muse, and everything else, cooperates, perhaps there will be one. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks to you as well.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you found this beginning well written.
Author's Response: Thank you. I only hope that you will enjoy the rest of what I wrote.
Anyway, it's just as profound on second and third reading. I love this twist on the mentor/adopted son/Severitus(?) storyline. I'm intrigued that Dumbledore will let Severus off the hook for spying on Voldemort. I suspect he'll try to snag Draco for that on down the line, but that pales to the Very Original Idea that binding himself, and Potter, to the Prince name and blood will break the Dark Mark binding Severus to Voldemort. I wonder if it will do anything to the horcrux in Harry's scar, or if you don't plan to have that storyline, if the binding will break Harry's Voldemort-link-induced headaches and nightmares. I SO look forward to your next chapter! Author's Response: Wow, thank you. I'm honored that you read this initial chapter through more than once, and am humbled by your feedback. I fear that the rest of what I wrote for this particular story will be disappointing to you as I do not go into any of those details that you mentioned. What I wrote is mostly about the transformation of Severus, but I'd like to visit these ideas that you mentioned in a companion story that will focus more on Severus and Harry.
Thank you again!
I like the twist that the taking of the Prince name and magic could undo Volde's. Looking forward to more. Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you liked the ending of the chapter. :D I'm glad that you like the twist, and hope that you will like the rest of this. Such as it is.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope that you will enjoy this story. I am playing around with characterization, etc. Having fun as a writer, hopefully others will enjoy along with me.
However, JKR needed stuff for the next four books, so conflicts had to continue. We fanfiction people can fix all that, of course.... Author's Response: I don't focus much on canon events in this story. Other than the mention of Black (in keeping with the challenge poster's desire that this be set in books one, two or three), this focuses solely on made-up events. Not trying to fix anything, but definitely having fun with character exploration, and extrapolation of the known canon 'facts'. As such, hopefully the rest of this story won't disappoint as it is not canon or even action driven, but character driven.
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