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Title: Rebuilding Bridges 30 Mar 2022 4:22 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed seeing this side of Severus. It humanizes him, and allows us to feel his conflict.
Title: Rebuilding Bridges 12 May 2013 11:55 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter especially the makeover thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you; I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter, and the makeover as well. It was kind of fun to give Severus a makeover.
Title: Rebuilding Bridges 11 May 2013 3:57 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm going to blame this on being tired, but was it for is interview ith his grandfather that Sev improved his appearance? What did the beauty cream do? (and why would Pansy lend it to Mione?)

    Interesting chapter, so how much change will the blood adoption do to Harry?

    Author's Response:

    Yes, it was for the interview with his grandfather, and she let Hermione borrow it because Hermione asked. I think that the girl is vain enough to concede to let Hermione borrow a beauty product, even if all she does is crow about how she's responsible for how much improved Hermione's appearance is.

    The blood adoption will probably not cause much change, though, initially I had not written anything with regard to the actual adoption process, as my main focus was Severus, and how this whole thing has changed him. 

    Thanks for reading, and for sharing your thoughts. 

Title: Rebuilding Bridges 09 May 2013 9:44 pm
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    nice more please , but I want the grandfather to stay please

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading, and for writing a review. I hope that you will enjoy the next chapter, which does feature more of Severus' grandfather.
Title: Rebuilding Bridges 09 May 2013 5:31 pm
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed) [Report This]
    I really am enjoying the subtle twists in the story. Great job with his grandfather. I know all to well how one person can dominate the family

    Author's Response: Thank you; I'm glad that you like the subtle twists in the story, and that you understand how a person can dominate a family, and manipulate people, etc. I'm rather intimately familiar with that myself.
Title: Rebuilding Bridges 09 May 2013 6:03 am
Reviewer: Wandacarla (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay new chapter (: I can't wait for Harry to meet his new grandfather. Hope it goes well.

    Author's Response: I do hope that you will enjoy the newly penned chapter, and how the initial meeting betwen Harry and his new great grandfather goes. Thank you so much for reading, and for taking the time to share your thoughts with me. I ened up writing a new chapter as a result of your review.
Title: Rebuilding Bridges 09 May 2013 5:34 am
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    nicely done....

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Rebuilding Bridges 09 May 2013 4:49 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    so we finally meet grandpa-pa Prince. He seems like a lovable funny man that was very scared of his wife wrath...smart man.

    Author's Response: Indeed - women quite often rule the roost. Thank you so much for reading, and for taking the time to write a review. :-) I'm glad that you think grandpa Prince seems lovable and funny. I know he's quite a bit different from Severus, but hopefully it shows how differently Severus might have ended up had he been raised in a loving family.
Title: Rebuilding Bridges 09 May 2013 4:39 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed Severus' feelings as he looked in the mirror. It sounded like he cleaned up pretty well though. Interesting that his grandfather didn't find the courage to contact him until the grandmother was dying. I look forward to him meeting Harry. I also enjoyed the way Ron and Hermione played a part in the chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you; I'm glad that you enjoyed Severus' feelings as he looked in the mirror, and that he seemed to clean up well. Sometimes people allow their spouses to control whom they do and do not contact (I've seen it and lived through it), so for me, this is something that makes sense moreso than Prince just showing up out of the woodwork without having a reason as to why he's just suddenly showing up in Severus' life. I'm hoping that you will enjoy the next chapter (as soon as it is verified). I'm glad that you enjoyed how I wrote Ron and Hermione in this chapter (I had some negative feedback for that in particular, so I'm glad that at least one other person, aside from myself, liked it). Thank you!

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