Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: A Swiflty Tilting Perspective 30 Mar 2022 4:48 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the powerful and moving chapter.
Title: A Swiflty Tilting Perspective 22 May 2018 5:21 am
Reviewer: animefreak728 (Signed) [Report This]
    The story is a really interesting concept, but Snape has more flashbacks than an anime character.

    It's jolting and takes you out of the story when the same thing could be expressed through character actions or just a mention.

    For example if Snape just thought "I remember that fear" when Harry reacts a certain way towards an adult or something of the like. It'd easily convey a connection of abuse between them that we don't need to be showed through flashback. It's faster and feels less like you're holding the reader's hand.

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. I won't be reworking this story. I prefer it the way it is. To each, his or her own. 
Title: A Swiflty Tilting Perspective 18 Oct 2015 3:16 am
Reviewer: lastcrazyhorn (Signed) [Report This]
    *sniffles loudly*

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading. 
Title: A Swiflty Tilting Perspective 26 Jul 2013 1:27 am
Reviewer: Snooze (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good, made me tear up a bit, but it was sweet.
    Keep on keepin' on!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading this, and for letting me know that you liked it. I am glad that, even though it caused you to tear up a bit (which, is rather humbling to hear), that you thought it was sweet. I appreciate your encouragement. 
Title: A Swiflty Tilting Perspective 24 Jul 2013 9:12 am
Reviewer: Sunstar989 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story so far. Please finish it soon. I can't wait to see the rest

    Author's Response: Sorry that it has taken me so long to work out the next bit. This story was originally just a few chapters long, and I felt the need to flesh it out a little. I hope that, when the next portion is approved, you will enjoy it. Thank you for reading, and for encouraging me. 
Title: A Swiflty Tilting Perspective 27 Jun 2013 10:19 pm
Reviewer: annagardner11 (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it update soon

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and for encouraing me to continue with the telling of this story. 
Title: A Swiflty Tilting Perspective 13 Jun 2013 11:32 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Not sure if I reviewed this as I got interrupted when reading! Thank you a very insightful and emotional chapter

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading this, and for taking the time to leave a review. I really appreciate it. I'm glad that you thought the chapter was insightful and emotional, and I appreciate the encouragement. 
Title: A Swiflty Tilting Perspective 10 Jun 2013 11:31 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the emotion of this chapter especially the hand holding part very moving! Thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: A Swiflty Tilting Perspective 08 Jun 2013 6:10 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Hard lesson to practice... To let go of the past. Great chapter!

    Author's Response: It is a very hard lesson to practice, and one that I keep having to relearn. Thank you so much for reading, and for taking the time to write a review. It is greatly appreciated. 
Title: A Swiflty Tilting Perspective 05 Jun 2013 5:56 pm
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    well done!

    Author's Response: Thank you!

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