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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: A Swiflty Tilting Perspective 22 May 2018 5:21 am
Reviewer: animefreak728 (Signed) [Report This]
    The story is a really interesting concept, but Snape has more flashbacks than an anime character.

    It's jolting and takes you out of the story when the same thing could be expressed through character actions or just a mention.

    For example if Snape just thought "I remember that fear" when Harry reacts a certain way towards an adult or something of the like. It'd easily convey a connection of abuse between them that we don't need to be showed through flashback. It's faster and feels less like you're holding the reader's hand.

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. I won't be reworking this story. I prefer it the way it is. To each, his or her own. 
Title: New Beginnings 20 Sep 2017 6:40 am
Reviewer: ppn1958 (Signed) [Report This]
    EXCELLENT!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you! :-)
Title: New Beginnings 25 Mar 2016 3:30 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Totally wonderful.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much; I'm glad that you enjoyed this. 
Title: A Swiflty Tilting Perspective 18 Oct 2015 3:16 am
Reviewer: lastcrazyhorn (Signed) [Report This]
    *sniffles loudly*

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading. 
Title: Argument Interrupted 22 Jul 2015 2:19 pm
Reviewer: ailishmckechnie (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well written. I loved the family bonding and the characterization of Severus. You have written a well paced relationship between Harry and Severus. I've read too many were Harry and Snape immediately hit it off. Had hoped there was a sequel though *sad face*

    Author's Response: I've been struggling with writing anything lately, so even thinking of a sequel at this point is a lot of work. I've recently made a few breakthroughs with writing, which will hopefully continue. Thank you for reading this, and letting me know what you liked about it, and that you are interested in a sequel. If the muse, and everything else, cooperates, perhaps there will be one. Thank you!
Title: New Beginnings 06 Mar 2015 6:09 am
Reviewer: Love4Spock (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story. I got teary-eyed.

    Author's Response: Thank you, Love4Spock. I'm glad that you liked this story, and really appreciate the feedback. 
Title: New Beginnings 31 Jan 2015 3:56 pm
Reviewer: azulkan (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story. Made me teary eyed.

    Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed reading this. :-) And humbled that it made you teary eyed. 
Title: New Beginnings 23 Dec 2014 12:03 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwww.
    This is beautifully done.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate the feedback!
Title: New Beginnings 03 Dec 2014 4:39 am
Reviewer: Flyingchrissy (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool story!!! Look forward to reading the next one. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D I'm glad that you thought this was a cool story. 
Title: New Beginnings 27 Oct 2014 10:03 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, this filled me with so many feels. I feel that you have done a wonderful job of crafting this story in a way that was true to the characters and was nicely paced. Loved the memories with Lily interspersed throughout - brilliant job with all of those.

    Enjoyable read. I really like this!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much, Dream Painter. I am humbled by your words, and am happy that you enjoyed the story. I always worry that what I write isn't good enough, so, thank you for letting me know that you thought it was well-crafted, and that it was true to the characters. I wasn't sure how the memories of Lily would play out, but I'm glad that you thought they worked well. Thank you! 


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