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Reviews For Windowsill Confessions
I like how you use an idea that as been done a lot before but with a far better characterization of Severus and Ron. I am very curious to see the meeting between Severus and his grandfather ! Thank you for your story :) Author's Response: Thank you; I'm glad that, though this plot is a tired one, you like how I've characterized Severus and Ron (two of my favorite characters). I hope that you'll like the meeting between Severus and his grandfather. Thank you for reading, and for sharing your thoughts with me.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you find this story to be interesting because of how I've chosen to write Ron (a tad ooc) and Snape, and that the flashbacks aren't jarring, but that they seem to fit with the plot. I appreciate the feedback, and thank you for reading. :-)
Author's Response: Harry is way too typical in this...sorry. I think that Severus showing Harry what Petunia did when she was younger would go a long way toward helping Harry understand that it isn't him, but it really, and truly, is her. I haven't written that, but then again, I hadn't written this last chapter at the onset either. Thank you for reading, and for taking the time to share your thoughts with me.
Author's Response: Being a cantankerous person myself, I'd have to agree with your assessment. Thank you so much for reading, and for taking the time to share your thoughts with me. I'm hoping you're liking it. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D I'm glad that you like the story thus far.
Author's Response: Thank you; I'm glad you thought so.
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear it. Thank you.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you've found this to be enjoyable thus far, and that you like the style of writing. I love Ron, so, I like portraying him this way. Not enough Ron stories out there, in my opinion. Thanks for reading, and for taking the time to review. It is greatly appreciated. :-)
I rather liked the conversations with Ron and Hermionie--sneaky way to get some small insights to our Harry. V. Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the conversations with Ron and Hermione. It was an idea I'd run by a friend first, and she thought it would work well. Thank you!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like the beginning. I might have to rework the next intended chapter, as I don't really have Harry's reaction at all. The writing was all about Severus. |
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