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Title: Dreams and Memory 05 May 2013 10:45 am
Reviewer: Acop (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Quite a good beginning so far :)
    I like how you use an idea that as been done a lot before but with a far better characterization of Severus and Ron.
    I am very curious to see the meeting between Severus and his grandfather !
    Thank you for your story :)

    Author's Response: Thank you; I'm glad that, though this plot is a tired  one, you like how I've characterized Severus and Ron (two of my favorite characters). I hope that you'll like the meeting between Severus and his grandfather. Thank you for reading, and for sharing your thoughts with me.
Title: Dreams and Memory 05 May 2013 8:38 am
Reviewer: Karis (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is amazing! Though the plot of the story is similar to many out there, there are some key differences that make it a pleasure to read. Ron isn't an idiot for once, Snape is actually in character, and the flashbacks are well done and make sense in the story. I'm also interested in how Snape's grandfather will come into play in this story. I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

    Author's Response: I'm glad that you find this story to be interesting because of how I've chosen to write Ron (a tad ooc) and Snape, and that the flashbacks aren't jarring, but that they seem to fit with the plot. I appreciate the feedback, and thank you for reading. :-)
Title: Dreams and Memory 05 May 2013 7:00 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    I knew Harry would be like that. Maybe severus should show Harry what Petunia did to him and his mom when they were younger to prove that its not his fault and that she has been the way she is for a lot longer then he has known her.

    Author's Response: Harry is way too typical in this...sorry. I think that Severus showing Harry what Petunia did when she was younger would go a long way toward helping Harry understand that it isn't him, but it really, and truly, is her. I haven't written that, but then again, I hadn't written this last chapter at the onset either. Thank you for reading, and for taking the time to share your thoughts with me.
Title: Dreams and Memory 05 May 2013 5:53 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Sev was having flashbacks throughout the chapter, no wonder if snapped. Those things put anyone on edge, let alone someone who is already cantankerous.

    Author's Response:

    Being a cantankerous person myself, I'd have to agree with your assessment. Thank you so much for reading, and for taking the time to share your thoughts with me. I'm hoping you're liking it. :-)

Title: Dotting i's and Crossing t's 30 Apr 2013 10:05 pm
Reviewer: Katrina (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter so far! I give it a 10!

    Author's Response: Thank you! :D I'm glad that you like the story thus far.
Title: Dotting i's and Crossing t's 29 Apr 2013 11:43 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you I thought this chapter was very well thought out and showed excellent characterisation thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you; I'm glad you thought so.
Title: Dotting i's and Crossing t's 29 Apr 2013 11:14 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it. Looking forward to more :D

    Author's Response: I'm happy to hear it. Thank you.
Title: Dotting i's and Crossing t's 29 Apr 2013 9:33 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Very enjoyable so far. I like your style of writing, and I'm a sucker for any story that portrays Ron as more than a brainless idiot. It should be interesting to find out more about Snape's grandfather (wizards so rarely seem to make it past middle age despite supposedly having a long life span)and to find out Harry's reaction to Snape's proposal/decision.

    Author's Response: I'm glad that you've found this to be enjoyable thus far, and that you like the style of writing. I love Ron, so, I like portraying him this way. Not enough Ron stories out there, in my opinion. Thanks for reading, and for taking the time to review. It is greatly appreciated. :-)
Title: Dotting i's and Crossing t's 29 Apr 2013 1:53 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the update!

    I rather liked the conversations with Ron and Hermionie--sneaky way to get some small insights to our Harry.

    V.

    Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the conversations with Ron and Hermione. It was an idea I'd run by a friend first, and she thought it would work well. Thank you!
Title: Dotting i's and Crossing t's 29 Apr 2013 1:35 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Great beginning. I can't wait to see Harry's reaction to the adoptions. lol

    Author's Response: I'm glad that you like the beginning. I might have to rework the next intended chapter, as I don't really have Harry's reaction at all. The writing was all about Severus.

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