Unfortunately because I write so much (usually several chapters in the space of a couple of hours) I don't always catch the errors like spelling names wrong.  While I appreciate that JK Rowling might find this offensive, it is a little bit nit picky to find the three or four errors in an entire body of work.  I don't have Microsoft Word, I have Word Pad, which has no spell checker, and while I do go back over my work, I do occasionally miss things.  If you would care to elaborate on giving the characters more depth, I welcome your input.  What issues and feelings have I touched upon but not developed?  You say I have never once done it but I don't think this is the case.  I would love to hear some in depth constructive criticism on this specific issue, as I am always open to learning to become a better writer.  Unfortunately you must be a little more specific so I can see an example or two of what you're talking about.  I realize that Arcane being the sequel is quite undeveloped especially being in it's early chapters, but I thought the first story in the series did have depth so if you could give me examples from that I would be happy to look over them.

Thank you for taking the time to review.  Have a nice day.