Lol Harry Grotter and the Sands of Time. Lol lol lol. Who's the author? KJ Growling? Love the story. read both first and second story all in one night. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
| Title: Anxious
| 28 Sep 2013 2:29 pm
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| Reviewer: ecl1ps3 (Anonymous)
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please update soon, I would like to see what happen next !!! >.<
| Title: Anxious
| 26 Aug 2013 12:19 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Liked the interaction between them but I would like a bit of angst as you do that so well
| Title: Anxious
| 25 Aug 2013 5:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Why doesn't Harry just start writting in a new journal?
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| 23 Aug 2013 7:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Sarah (Anonymous)
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Love it!. Please update soon.
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| 23 Aug 2013 2:28 pm
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| Reviewer: lynda (Anonymous)
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can i just say how much i love you right now?, im new to this sight and found my secret father last night, after finishing that i stumbled across this one and to say i was dismayed when i saw how long it had been since you updated would be a complete understatement.
i like how you manage to convey so many of harry s emotions whilst keeping the pace of the story, most people tend to have harry forgive snape within the space of a couple of chapters and i'm in so glad to see that you have made it so harry wants to be part of the family but is struggling to move past all the horrible things he has suffered through because of his father's blatant neglect.
i would love to see snape, maybe question harry on some of the entries in the journal. I want to see him get a real picture of what Harry's life with the dursley's was like and to truly feel guilt and remorse for all the damage and pain he as caused.
I'll stop rambling now lol. I really hope you update soon as i cant wait to read more.
I enjoyed this, especially how uncomfortable Harry is with Snape spending money on him and that. I do hope that they can overcome their differences and form a good father/son relationship eventually.
Maybe Snape could realise that Harry misses his diary and give him a new one? Possibly even one that has a twin, which is in Snape's hands, so that Harry can write down the things that he does not dare talk face to face to his father about?
I love these series and please update soon!
Please continue :(
i love this fic!
| Title: Absent
| 25 Jul 2013 12:36 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Aww poor Harry. Will you be updating this story?
| Title: Absent
| 18 Jul 2013 10:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Meghan Snape (; (Anonymous)
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I loved your first story when i read it and now i was looking forward to reading this one but it isn't finished, and it only has two chapters! please, please, please could you update soon and just ease my misery! I really look this plot line and i want to read more about it. You have a great writing technique and it makes the story even better!
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