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Reviews For Psychosis
Title: Lily's child 22 Jun 2013 6:25 pm
Reviewer: kspence (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a really good chapter.
Title: Lily's child 10 May 2013 12:04 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start to the story thank you
Title: Lily's child 05 May 2013 11:02 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting premise, I like your portrayal of the characters though you might want to try reading dialogue aloud- mostly it flows and sounds realistic but some parts sound a little stilted.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reviewing!

    When I wrote the first chapter, I had just started writing in English (I'm not a native speaker) so I hope my skills will have improved by now! (Though I must admit, I thought it rather difficult to write Vernon and Petunia in a halfway credible way)


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